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Array ( [sid] => 101259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Gilded Cage [time] => 2005-07-15 09:54:07 [hometext] => Came to me while driving on I-95. Writing (even a short poem) while driving is a tricky thing...comments plz [bodytext] => the sun cleaves the veil
of cotton so white
my heart lov'ngly pierced
by gold'n ray so brite

my free will dries up
my soul totally hers
imagining freedom
gives me the shivers

this cage is so gilded
it is my new home
she eases my pains
i'm never alone

cage metal expands
into a portcul-lis
safe behind solid stone
we enjoy our first kiss

a portcullis [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Gilded Cage

Contributed by jaycee on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 09:54:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

the sun cleaves the veil
of cotton so white
my heart lov'ngly pierced
by gold'n ray so brite

my free will dries up
my soul totally hers
imagining freedom
gives me the shivers

this cage is so gilded
it is my new home
she eases my pains
i'm never alone

cage metal expands
into a portcul-lis
safe behind solid stone
we enjoy our first kiss

a portcullis

Copyright © jaycee ... [ 2005-07-15 09:54:07]
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Re: The Gilded Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 08:19:29 PM AEST
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Jaycee,

I love this poem. It is just perfect and you have melted my heart, and broken down my walls, I think you are amazing !!!!!!!

Love Leia36

Re: The Gilded Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:37:50 PM AEST
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OMG that is such an amazing poem. gosh u have not lost ur touch at all... if nething u got better. just... wow *breathless*
amazing poem! i wanna read it again *scrolls back up to top*...
jennie

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