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I Open My Eyes once again
and what do you think I see
A Beautiful lady standing there
who wants to be here with me

I reach out and touch her
I feel her warmth in my hand
She falls gently into my arms
no longer able to stand

The feelings that we both have
quite evident right away
The passion there immediately
what else is there to say

You stop to think, is this a dream
or is she really there
So you close your eyes and open them again
running your fingers through her hair

How utterly wonderful it is
to be so romantically in love
To have someone there beside you
that you are constantly, in awe of

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I Open My Eyes

Contributed by Bruce on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I Open My Eyes

I Open My Eyes once again
and what do you think I see
A Beautiful lady standing there
who wants to be here with me

I reach out and touch her
I feel her warmth in my hand
She falls gently into my arms
no longer able to stand

The feelings that we both have
quite evident right away
The passion there immediately
what else is there to say

You stop to think, is this a dream
or is she really there
So you close your eyes and open them again
running your fingers through her hair

How utterly wonderful it is
to be so romantically in love
To have someone there beside you
that you are constantly, in awe of

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2005-07-11 13:53:56]
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Re: I Open My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by zenaprincess on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:41:56 PM AEST
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thats beautiful Bruce - if you wrote that for a special lady in your life she is a very lucky woman.

Re: I Open My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:14:20 PM AEST
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Bruce, you are an old romantic. this is a lovely poem.Definetely full of romantic love.More please, ros

Re: I Open My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 09:25:27 PM AEST
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Sighs....
Nuff said!! lol
Jenni

Re: I Open My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:18:10 AM AEST
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Marvelous.

Re: I Open My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:37:49 PM AEST
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awesome write keep up the good work even tho you have been

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