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I never gave you a name
I dont even what gender you are
but I know I love you all the same

I dont know how to justify
What i've done to you
Although I know its not my fault
To my heart I feel untrue

I wish That I could see you
Even if its in my dreams
I would say sorry if I hurt you
And life is never what it seems

I would hug and kiss you once
And maybe hold your hand
I would try to be there
I hope you will understand

I know that your not here
But I promise everyday
That I will forever love the baby
Who's life I gave away.

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My unborn child.

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Although I never met you
I never gave you a name
I dont even what gender you are
but I know I love you all the same

I dont know how to justify
What i've done to you
Although I know its not my fault
To my heart I feel untrue

I wish That I could see you
Even if its in my dreams
I would say sorry if I hurt you
And life is never what it seems

I would hug and kiss you once
And maybe hold your hand
I would try to be there
I hope you will understand

I know that your not here
But I promise everyday
That I will forever love the baby
Who's life I gave away.

Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2003-01-09 19:20:00]
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Re: My unborn child. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:47:33 PM AEST
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Wow. What a poem. Did you have a misscarriage or have an abortion?? I'll be praying for you. God Bless

Re: My unborn child. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jade on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:36:26 PM AEST
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THIS IS ONE INCREDIBLE POEM. MY HEART FEELS YOUR PAIN.

Re: My unborn child. (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:37:05 PM AEST
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AAHH this touched me hard,I don't know what happened but I can feel in this poetry It had to be hard to go through! Best of luck to you!
Christina

Re: My unborn child. (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 02:36:27 AM AEST
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I was a little bit angry at your second stanza.
but now I was deeply moved by your motherly cry....Venkat

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