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Array ( [sid] => 100657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cornie [time] => 2005-07-09 12:07:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your blue eyes
They haunt me
From photos
They lie

That smile
Once charming
Now chilling
And dry

Your fingers
Once woven
Around
In my hand

Now clutch at
My heart
Their grip
Is the end

They say silence
Is golden
But that's
Not the case

Your silence
It fills me
With dread
And with hate

The good times
Are gone now
The light
Is now dark

My memories
Will linger
Sad times
They will mark

KB [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 52 [informant] => zenaprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Cornie

Contributed by zenaprincess on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:07:38 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Your blue eyes
They haunt me
From photos
They lie

That smile
Once charming
Now chilling
And dry

Your fingers
Once woven
Around
In my hand

Now clutch at
My heart
Their grip
Is the end

They say silence
Is golden
But that's
Not the case

Your silence
It fills me
With dread
And with hate

The good times
Are gone now
The light
Is now dark

My memories
Will linger
Sad times
They will mark

KB

Copyright © zenaprincess ... [ 2005-07-09 12:07:38]
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Re: Cornie (User Rating: 1 )
by manic_x_pressive on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:45:46 PM AEST
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WOW! This was a good read, dark, yet upbeat. The rhythm was outstanding and it flowed very well. I especially enjoyed the comparison of "then and now". If I may make one constructive suggestion? Punctuation usage would have enhanced this write and accentuated the tempo.

Re: Cornie (User Rating: 1 )
by Janie on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:29:32 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem! Your word use was extremely powerful as was the beat of the poem. Keep writing and please comment on my poem "You are EVERYTHING."

Re: Cornie (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:47:04 PM AEST
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i dont think iv ever read a poem with this kind of rhyming in it.
i loved it.

Your blue eyes
They haunt me
From photos
They lie

That smile
Once charming
Now chilling
And dry

just amazng. i cant say much other then that i thought this piece is wonderful.
5/5 well done
-Arden

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