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ANGEL OF DEATH
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:55:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Holding back these tears of pain
Raising my voice to scream in vain
Two black eyes stare into mine
Deaths desire and qualm divine
She slowly speaks as I draw last breath
Dark yet beautiful the Angel of death
Her words come soft and settle in me
Through her blood-red lips does she speak
She sees my broken heart and soul
How I am lost and how I am cold
Like ecstasy provides an infinite high
I see her face softly before I die
Deep eyes of black and skin of white
She comes to steal my soul in the night
Angel of death call out my name
Take away life and take away pain
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Re: ANGEL OF DEATH
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:07:13 PM AEST
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great write, jennie! i loved it, and the angel of death has visited me a couple of times, but she better not take you away! I need you jennie, you're a great friend and i'd hate to lose you!! please, tell the damned angel 'no'. or i'll come over and tell her myself. i care about you jennie, no matter what you think. and i'd miss you like hell. please, don't go. and remmeber, abby and i aren't dying yet and we must 'die alone together', remember that!
great write, i loved it! keep it up!
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Re: ANGEL OF DEATH
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:30:48 AM AEST
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its very good ive had the angel of death stare me in the face more than i can count but i told her to get the hell away its not my time yet not till i say so well good write and keep it up read some of mine and leave comment please tu bye
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