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[title] => Upon my Death
[time] => 2003-01-09 11:20:00
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If I should Die before I awake,
Or driving this Mountain I make a mistake,
I Wish my Poetry my Daughter to take,
And My Wish is that She Publish.
Most of my Animals will be able to be re-homed,
Though Mastiff Rescue will need to be phoned,
Huggs for my sweet Son Mick Who lives away,
Darlings, You'll all again have Happy Days,
I leave the Farm to my Daughter Mara dear,
My littlest George to her; I want that clear,
Mara will need help from all of You;
This is My Wish; and it is True.
~Nessa Sharon Miller~
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Upon my Death
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I should Die before I awake,
Or driving this Mountain I make a mistake,
I Wish my Poetry my Daughter to take,
And My Wish is that She Publish.
Most of my Animals will be able to be re-homed,
Though Mastiff Rescue will need to be phoned,
Huggs for my sweet Son Mick Who lives away,
Darlings, You'll all again have Happy Days,
I leave the Farm to my Daughter Mara dear,
My littlest George to her; I want that clear,
Mara will need help from all of You;
This is My Wish; and it is True.
~Nessa Sharon Miller~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-01-09 11:20:00]
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Re: Upon my Death
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by aernby on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:52:35 AM AEST
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a poetic last will and testament -- i pray that its many a year before it sees probate!
great write --
May the Muse Bless ---
aern+ |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:56:22 AM AEST
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This is good although it worries me. Keep up your poems. Whats up with the Mastiff Rescue part? Keep smiling...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by thorns on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:45:21 PM AEST
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| it's a good idea to let ppl know these sort of things, since we never know when we might not be around to tell them. |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:14:53 PM AEST
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| how sweet but sad, we don't want you to leave yet, you have much to do here, will you stay? hugs |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:22:49 PM AEST
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Dearest Joel, Thank You for asking:)
(Engish Mastiffs) Mastiff Club of America and Neapolitain Mastiff Rescue (whom my Dogs would need) (all over the world for all breeds) are organizations that re-homes the Big Dogs.. mine are 200 average, although my largest was Oliver who was 240pounds.. not your average re-homing lol The most Rescue Mastiffs (of the Englesh variety) I had in my house at one time was 7.. I never saw the bed lol.. they love being comfy, you know, really just big lap doggies.. Anyway; I want Mastiff Rescue to take in my dogs and re-home them should my daughter Mara not be able to care for them, and my Neapolitain is a beast and Mara definatly would need help with him:)
Love, Huggs, Drools and Woofies
Always Nessa
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Re: Upon my Death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:37:07 PM AEST
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Slow down, grrl...al this talk of epitaphs and death..... I don't wanna hear any more ...ok!
Nice write tho....and I hope it won't come to this....in a very long time.....
Hugs
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Re: Upon my Death
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:44:18 PM AEST
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.....Good way to get my attention, mom. Of course I'd take care of the farm and everything if you... Don't want to think about it. Better live to be a hundred, too. I would probably need help from your friends here 'cause I don't know how to publish--yet-- anything that you've written. Erm... I know you're being a realist, but this is something that was kinda hard for me to answer. -_-'
Love ya',
Mara xoxo :P |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 06:10:26 PM AEST
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This made me smile Nessa because I had only just been writing my Will the other day, and thinking about "who will I give this too, who will I give that too" .... and I thought "mmm .... what will happen to my poetry as my daughter is only 9!" .... well, I guess it all just disappears into the mist somewhere .... Enjoyed this one.
Jan |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by spooky on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:10:40 PM AEST
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| I made a lot of friends,,and your not leaving me know,,unless the lord god himself says so,,,,beautifully written,,spooky |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:37:56 AM AEST
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| Awww Valerie, that's so sweet! huggers back:) |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:40:28 AM AEST
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| I love You (((Mara))) x x x... |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:42:24 AM AEST
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| hey hey all the great poets are dead ones, except the ones on our sites! |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by roisin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:38:44 PM AEST
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| This is a topic that one often finds quite difficult to raise with one's children. Your approach I found to be very creative and low key...which I thought great!! My thanks to both you and your daughter for sharing. ta rosie |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by Damien on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:42:54 AM AEST
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Hi,
That was a really cool poem.Keep up the good work.
Damien. |
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Re: Upon my Death
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:27:21 AM AEST
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| this is peretty, although i do hope this doesnt happen soon, for i love to read your poems! thanks for sharing! |
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