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Your healing touch…

The silence was perfect
We needn’t say much

I remember the way you held me
Till the morning in your strong arms…

First love did pierce my soul
Bound by your charms

Such unknown emotions
Of which seemed surreal

I remember just how loved
You did made me feel

Memories still burn inside my heart
As I try to move on
Break free
But
You changed my life
You changed me

I will never find anyone
On this earth

As extraordinary as you
Who shall ever meet your worth

I will never find anyone
To love again
Like you

Your beauty unsurpassable
Your tenderness so true

Without you near
Life’s meaning
Is nonexistent

Without you here
Every anguished tear
Is consistent

My sad heart does know
With it’s every worthless endeavour

That you’re unmatched smile
Will be absent from me forever

I need you here…
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His Absent Smile

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I remember your precious face…
Your healing touch…

The silence was perfect
We needn’t say much

I remember the way you held me
Till the morning in your strong arms…

First love did pierce my soul
Bound by your charms

Such unknown emotions
Of which seemed surreal

I remember just how loved
You did made me feel

Memories still burn inside my heart
As I try to move on
Break free
But
You changed my life
You changed me

I will never find anyone
On this earth

As extraordinary as you
Who shall ever meet your worth

I will never find anyone
To love again
Like you

Your beauty unsurpassable
Your tenderness so true

Without you near
Life’s meaning
Is nonexistent

Without you here
Every anguished tear
Is consistent

My sad heart does know
With it’s every worthless endeavour

That you’re unmatched smile
Will be absent from me forever

I need you here…

Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-07-05 21:49:25]
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Re: His Absent Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:16:23 AM AEST
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Rach this is such a sad, deep and emotional write. I can feel ur pain and sadness with every word. May things work out for u.
Heartfelt hugs for u,
Dreamer

Re: His Absent Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:52:27 PM AEST
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a sadenning write indeed...love is one of the most painful things to lose.

wizard

Re: His Absent Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:56:01 PM AEST
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Wow great expression
very deep indeed
the second stanza
was so simply put
but complex to really understand
If you were never in love you will
never understand the ture
meaning behide it I give you a
"BIG" "BIG" ........"5".............

Re: His Absent Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheaa on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:15:07 AM AEST
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Isn't it funny how one person can alter everthing you thought you were...and change it into something totally different? I love it.

Excellent.
You wrote it in a way people could understand, I like that. Keep it up, you have an amazing talent.
tons of love,
sheaa ♥

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