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Array ( [sid] => 100170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Ditty [time] => 2005-07-05 10:22:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wanted to write
Something deep and profound
To take me and my life
And my pen and just write
I wanted to be
The best of the best
Have everyone cheering
for me. Not the rest.
I wanted to win
To succeed just the once
See there proud, smiling faces
Peer up from the crowd
‘Cause they never believed
They never knew
They never knew
What this girl could do
They’re the ones who
Have just held me back
Have stopped me launching
My best attack
They’ve spent the years
Searing it into my brain
That I’ll never do well
That it never just rains
But it pours and it pours
And all just for me
All ‘cause of me
The rain and the storms

So this little ditty’s
For all those that thought
That my pointless life
would amount to nought

This cluster of words
mayn’t be clustered so well
But I clustered them
And I’m doing just swell

Don’t smile at me
As you wander past
Thinking “loner� “loser�
What would you know?
About what I’ve been doing
Who I am
Who I’ve been
Its been a few years
You’ve changed
Same with me

So this little ditty
is did just for you
I may not be on top
But I will be soon

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => KRzy_B [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Little Ditty

Contributed by KRzy_B on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:22:23 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I wanted to write
Something deep and profound
To take me and my life
And my pen and just write
I wanted to be
The best of the best
Have everyone cheering
for me. Not the rest.
I wanted to win
To succeed just the once
See there proud, smiling faces
Peer up from the crowd
‘Cause they never believed
They never knew
They never knew
What this girl could do
They’re the ones who
Have just held me back
Have stopped me launching
My best attack
They’ve spent the years
Searing it into my brain
That I’ll never do well
That it never just rains
But it pours and it pours
And all just for me
All ‘cause of me
The rain and the storms

So this little ditty’s
For all those that thought
That my pointless life
would amount to nought

This cluster of words
mayn’t be clustered so well
But I clustered them
And I’m doing just swell

Don’t smile at me
As you wander past
Thinking “loner� “loser�
What would you know?
About what I’ve been doing
Who I am
Who I’ve been
Its been a few years
You’ve changed
Same with me

So this little ditty
is did just for you
I may not be on top
But I will be soon





Copyright © KRzy_B ... [ 2005-07-05 10:22:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Little Ditty (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:29:47 AM AEST
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strong you go girl and dont let people make you feel or think your less than. We all have our own talent and yours shines in this write you have an inner spark noone said you had to be tops just press forward in all you do and do your best hold your head up and go for it!
Michelle




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