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Array ( [sid] => 100136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thankyou [time] => 2005-07-04 22:57:36 [hometext] => This was written, to thank two very special friends, who helped me out, with my former boyfriend [bodytext] => You've seen it all
the tears the pain,
you've heard my lonely heart complain.

You've heard me cry through out the night,
you've seen me fail and give in to the fight.

You've felt my bitter tears run down,
you kept telling me to stay calm.

At first I didn't believe my friends,
but I soon realised they were telling the truth.

I stopped trying to believe,
so then I told him he had to leave.

I was sad and very upset,
I was even thinking about taking him back.
But I soon realised I didn't need him,
no matter how upset that made me.

I tried to get him off my mind,
and tried to forget about how much he hurt me,
but deep down I was still hurting,
and all I needed was time.

I'm sorry to my friends,
for believing him over them,
but thanks heaps to them all,
for being there when I needed them most.

I love you guys with all my heart,
you always know what to say,
and when to say it,
so thank you for saving me from this world. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 37 [informant] => caido [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

Thankyou

Contributed by caido on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:57:36 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

You've seen it all
the tears the pain,
you've heard my lonely heart complain.

You've heard me cry through out the night,
you've seen me fail and give in to the fight.

You've felt my bitter tears run down,
you kept telling me to stay calm.

At first I didn't believe my friends,
but I soon realised they were telling the truth.

I stopped trying to believe,
so then I told him he had to leave.

I was sad and very upset,
I was even thinking about taking him back.
But I soon realised I didn't need him,
no matter how upset that made me.

I tried to get him off my mind,
and tried to forget about how much he hurt me,
but deep down I was still hurting,
and all I needed was time.

I'm sorry to my friends,
for believing him over them,
but thanks heaps to them all,
for being there when I needed them most.

I love you guys with all my heart,
you always know what to say,
and when to say it,
so thank you for saving me from this world.

Copyright © caido ... [ 2005-07-04 22:57:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thankyou (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:11:47 AM AEST
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what a lovely tribute to your friends, hang on to them for friends are like 4-leaf clovers, rare and hard to find:) warm welcome to ypdc too, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Thankyou (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:20:06 AM AEST
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Wow you do have a gift and a way with words just keep writting.

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