Array ( [sid] => 21363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Self-Performed Critique [time] => 2003-08-02 05:05:00 [hometext] => Who do I look like? [bodytext] => Picture, picture, on the wall,
am I short or am I tall?
I cannot see as others see me,
Do I look like Jimmy Cagney.

I get to wonder, if I blunder,
If my head's a simple dunder?
Know I not how look I be
Somehow I, of me, don't see.

This may sound a wee bit stilted,
For I may be a wee bit tilted,
I need not look at me and grunt
standing at the mirror front.

All females a dressing table
Have they not to make them able,
See themselves as GOD had made them
Douse themselves and then parade them.

How you look, a people puzzle,
Look ye grand and people nuzzle,
That's the aim of every person,
Love, be loved is life's immersion. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 7 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry ) Your Poetry Dot Com - Self-Performed Critique


Self-Performed Critique
Date: Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: norm
Picture, picture, on the wall,
am I short or am I tall?
I cannot see as others see me,
Do I look like Jimmy Cagney.

I get to wonder, if I blunder,
If my head's a simple dunder?
Know I not how look I be
Somehow I, of me, don't see.

This may sound a wee bit stilted,
For I may be a wee bit tilted,
I need not look at me and grunt
standing at the mirror front.

All females a dressing table
Have they not to make them able,
See themselves as GOD had made them
Douse themselves and then parade them.

How you look, a people puzzle,
Look ye grand and people nuzzle,
That's the aim of every person,
Love, be loved is life's immersion.

This poem is Copyright © norm


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