Array ( [sid] => 181721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rebirth [time] => 2015-09-04 11:10:07 [hometext] => So a user on YPDC maybe a year ago, asked me to give him tips, because he wanted a ''no.1 poem''. Then he asked to duo a poem. I thought of taking time to each do two stanzas to make a poem like a rap duo. He never responded, so I'm now finishing it. :) [bodytext] => (The first two stanzas were done ahead of time, so the flow might be semi-similar, but I suppose this will be spoken word/rap no.5 I think.)



I set tones with choking voices
Demonstrate my weak and feeble mind
Illustrate efforts for right choices
As I slowly succumb to damnation in kind

I lack the right energy and skills
To escape my idiotic ignorant prisons
But I'll begin a sequence of commencing thrills
To shine through your oculus with profound visions

You bring the fire, and I'll bring the rain
I'll downpour and extinguish every ounce of hate
I drop from the sky like judgment held on high
While ivory towers wither crumble and collide

The end hasn't been seen yet, but trust that it's glorious!
The stone and structure of the unjust minority
Collapsing into an airborne dirt cacophony
Leaving nothing but a pool of love and empathy

Climbing from the ashes, and even from the dust,
An invariable escape from the great combust
With newfound courage to rebuild the bridge
To mitigate poison given to the heretics

Wait 'til the kings and their eyes have ceased
Making constant efforts to keep freedom seized
Wait 'til the blind and meek have seen
Every futile attempt to hide their destiny

[Probably the longest time I've ever spent editing, but I just can't keep going with it. Too much. :( ] [comments] => 2 [counter] => 120 [topic] => 73 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract ) Your Poetry Dot Com - The Rebirth


The Rebirth
Date: Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 11:10:07 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: xHeathenx
(The first two stanzas were done ahead of time, so the flow might be semi-similar, but I suppose this will be spoken word/rap no.5 I think.)



I set tones with choking voices
Demonstrate my weak and feeble mind
Illustrate efforts for right choices
As I slowly succumb to damnation in kind

I lack the right energy and skills
To escape my idiotic ignorant prisons
But I'll begin a sequence of commencing thrills
To shine through your oculus with profound visions

You bring the fire, and I'll bring the rain
I'll downpour and extinguish every ounce of hate
I drop from the sky like judgment held on high
While ivory towers wither crumble and collide

The end hasn't been seen yet, but trust that it's glorious!
The stone and structure of the unjust minority
Collapsing into an airborne dirt cacophony
Leaving nothing but a pool of love and empathy

Climbing from the ashes, and even from the dust,
An invariable escape from the great combust
With newfound courage to rebuild the bridge
To mitigate poison given to the heretics

Wait 'til the kings and their eyes have ceased
Making constant efforts to keep freedom seized
Wait 'til the blind and meek have seen
Every futile attempt to hide their destiny

[Probably the longest time I've ever spent editing, but I just can't keep going with it. Too much. :( ]

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