Array ( [sid] => 169829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My second sad-sack poem [time] => 2012-01-01 11:15:14 [hometext] => Would appreciate opinions on this. The intended audience will never read it, and I just wanted to know if it is as laughably bad as it seems to me. The last line is in reference to [bodytext] => 5 years time
since we called it quits
and crossed state lines
which just 5 years before
Id have said is 5 years more
than we would ever be apart for.

It's true that I dont know you anymore
and it's an unfair future you have in store;
eternally shackled to the ghost of disappointment's past
the burdensome baby-father, the unsavory chore,
the email author you'd most like to see last.
So from my insecure self-imposed exile,
ill make this uninvited self-indulgence fast.

Ive come back to haunt you today
merely to say, and probably betray
the harbored inking of love that yet remains,
regardless of the said and done, and come what may,
that the warmth of our two step be remembered,
and not the tings we cannot change. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 24 [informant] => anonymouse [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish make to respond. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered ) Your Poetry Dot Com - My second sad-sack poem


My second sad-sack poem
Date: Sunday, 1st January 2012 @ 11:15:14 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: anonymouse
5 years time
since we called it quits
and crossed state lines
which just 5 years before
Id have said is 5 years more
than we would ever be apart for.

It's true that I dont know you anymore
and it's an unfair future you have in store;
eternally shackled to the ghost of disappointment's past
the burdensome baby-father, the unsavory chore,
the email author you'd most like to see last.
So from my insecure self-imposed exile,
ill make this uninvited self-indulgence fast.

Ive come back to haunt you today
merely to say, and probably betray
the harbored inking of love that yet remains,
regardless of the said and done, and come what may,
that the warmth of our two step be remembered,
and not the tings we cannot change.

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