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The rain it relaxes me
Like the sound of your voice
Surrenders me helpless
Do I really have a choice

Just like when I’m in the rain
And I feel that cold chill
I turn around to find you
Laying down on the hill

I come over to join you
And you ask me to sit
As I start sitting I fall
Just as luck would have it

But I fall into my world
The same world as before
But it seems somewhat different
As the rain starts to pour

This is not the world I knew
It’s not like in my dream
All the sudden in the distance
I hear a fainted scream

I start to run towards it
With the rain hitting my face
I then stop and realize
What is this strange and weird place

Then the screaming disappears
Like whispers in the wind
As you appear before me
Within the light that blinds

When my vision returned
You are holding out your hand
And you say “Come with me”
And I took hold of your hand

As I pass through the time
From the past to the present
Memories of you and me
Points out what my world meant

It meant that I love you
With every beat of my heart
You are the rain that thrills me
Throughout every body part.

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For the original My World poem go to my page and look at the 1st two poems (just for information on what I meant by the lines "But I fall into my world" to "It’s not like in my dream"



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You Are The Rain
Date: Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 06:34:15 PM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: DoubleS
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The rain it relaxes me
Like the sound of your voice
Surrenders me helpless
Do I really have a choice

Just like when I’m in the rain
And I feel that cold chill
I turn around to find you
Laying down on the hill

I come over to join you
And you ask me to sit
As I start sitting I fall
Just as luck would have it

But I fall into my world
The same world as before
But it seems somewhat different
As the rain starts to pour

This is not the world I knew
It’s not like in my dream
All the sudden in the distance
I hear a fainted scream

I start to run towards it
With the rain hitting my face
I then stop and realize
What is this strange and weird place

Then the screaming disappears
Like whispers in the wind
As you appear before me
Within the light that blinds

When my vision returned
You are holding out your hand
And you say “Come with me”
And I took hold of your hand

As I pass through the time
From the past to the present
Memories of you and me
Points out what my world meant

It meant that I love you
With every beat of my heart
You are the rain that thrills me
Throughout every body part.

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For the original My World poem go to my page and look at the 1st two poems (just for information on what I meant by the lines "But I fall into my world" to "It’s not like in my dream"



DoubleS, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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