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Just some poems :D
i want to post my poetry but i can only post like 2 everyday and i'm getting impatient so i figured i'd put some on here then when i can i'll slowly put them on the other thing
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The light slowly fades
As the night begins to feast
Darkness capturing everything
And converting into beasts
Minds swelling into rage
As the night lingers on
Pulsing with mysterious ways
Until the beginning of dawn
A red hue streaks the sky
Haunting the darkness once more
Taunting it and luring it
And dragging it to the shore
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Angered, feared
Unsympathetic tears
Demonic, delerious
Deceivingly mysterious
Controlling, pain
Unfaithfully insane
Hatred, scarred
Evillness unbarred
Torture, demented
Deathingly scented
Tragic, horrified
Blissfully glorified
Broken, unspoken
Contageous token
Eeriness, gorefest
Blood-driven porefest
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I used to be afraid
And hide in the corner
Shivering and crying
Because I was a tortured loner
The years dragged by
As everyone beat on me
Treating me like their slave
Depression fell on me
Soon I felt numb
As the pain subsided
I stepped into the dark
As life and death collided
Death became my master
Pain became my lust
Darkness my home
And people my distrust
Shadows lingered behind me
Blood spilled to the floor
Delerious delusions
Burned right to my core
Beasts became my army
Deathly darkness my fate
Blood-stained path my journey
Fearful enemies my bait
Re: Just some poems :D
I know how you feel. Yet in fairness I will not read your poems posted here. I will read the ones posted in the posting area. (Use your journal to write and work on your poetry. (People won't read your poetry posted their either) but you won't get comments like this one while you are waiting to transfer them. (My journal has over 100 entries) in 14 months I have received 2 comments. If you want to be able to post more poetry read and comment more. That is the way this site works. I hope this helps.
(Topic locked. Please note: Self promotion, especially for completely selfish reasons, will not be tolerated in the forums. The posting limits are there to stop this kind of behaviour. Please follow the rules. Please only post poetry on the homepage. - Moderator_16)