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This Is How It's Going To End!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 03:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



This is inspired by life. I hope you all like it... MaJ


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My heart is tied behind my back
My hands are broken,
My mouth is blinded
And my eyes have no words left to be spoken.

Im stepping outside of my skin
Healing of my wounds must begin
My ears are bleeding loud
My soul screams with no sound.

Dont leave me to die here,
Help me to survive here,
All these fake friends hiding betryal
Continuing to drive the nail.

Why should I give up, give in?
Ive become desilate, should I give in?
Ive lost my way, Should I give in?
Its not enough, it never is!

I wont say goodbye,
As we dance alone tonight,
If this was so wrong,
I would not stay so long.

So here we are,
Fighting eachother trying to hide the scars
How do I simplfy this is right?
Show me what its like to not have to fight!

This is what we are going to do,
This is the path we are going to take,
This is how its going to end,
We are going to.............................




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2007-01-26 15:40:43]
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Re: Re: This Is How It's Going To End! (User Rating: 1 )
by on Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 12:20:19 AM AEST
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your style is a little different than what i am used to but i think this is a godd poem. i like to be introduced to new styles so that maybe i can grow as a poet. keep on writing!!


Re: Re: This Is How It's Going To End! (User Rating: 1 )
by on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 01:17:13 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem. You're very talented!
Keep it up,
Jess


Re: Re: This Is How It's Going To End! (User Rating: 1 )
by on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 05:27:44 PM AEST
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I like it, pretty cool stuff.


Re: Re: (User Rating: 1 )
by on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 08:53:55 PM AEST
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"My heart is tied behind my back"
that first line hooked me. unfortunately, i was rather disappointed by the rest of the poem. however, you did manage to keep me interested enough to read the whole thing. trust me, not very many "poets" on this site get me to do that. anyways, you sort of changed your subject in the middle of the poem.. it threw me off. better luck next time (:


Re: Re: This Is How It's Going To End! (User Rating: 1 )
by on Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 02:34:14 AM AEST
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If this was so wrong,
I would not stay so long.

great line. i don't see the 'change in topic' or whatever it is cathartic said. i see it as things can be He, She, It...whatever. the ending, i like. hopefully, you never complete that last sentence.


Re: Re: This Is How It's Going To End! (User Rating: 1 )
by on Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 02:34:14 AM AEST
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If this was so wrong,
I would not stay so long.

great line. i don't see the 'change in topic' or whatever it is cathartic said. i see it as things can be He, She, It...whatever. the ending, i like. hopefully, you never complete that last sentence.




 

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