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The Dance

Contributed by tease_whizz on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic: eroticpoetry



I close my eyes and flash forward
To the moments I'm anticipating
Me and you in the smouldering darkness
On the dance floor of the club
Moving in time to the steady rhythm
Of a song I can't yet name but won't forget
The music runs through my veins
Like a potent elixir, I can almost taste it
Feeling myself surrender to its power
Pressing my body against yours
Letting you feel every sensual curve
Against every delicious inch of you
Sweet promises of much more later
Slow, seductive moves to tantalise
Running my fingers down your spine
And letting my hand wander
To places that ache to be touched
Teasing you 'til you beg for more
You pull me closer, passionately, urgently
With a masculine dominance
You know drives me crazy with desire
Fiery, hungry kisses, I turn away
Feeling your chest against my back
And your arms tightly around my waist
Forcing yourself against me
Making me hotter, insane with lust
Your hands are everywhere, all over me
As you cover my neck in kisses
And finally, the songs ends
We weave through the crowds of people
To leave, to make our way home
And begin the dance again.




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Re: Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:14:37 PM AEST
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This is really good, and helps explain your user namea little, at least I thought so. Your foreplay of words here are tantalizing in themself. Great write, keep it up!


Re: Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 04:30:27 AM AEST
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hehe, thank you! the poem was written after a particularly hot nite at a club in london - girls know how to tease, but we also know how to please!

i really liked your recent poems - theres a lot of raw emotion in your work, but expressed in a way that doesn't seem like just 'ranting'. keep them coming, Kate x


Re: Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:57:18 AM AEST
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Man that was great! almost felt like I was there. The words just flowed. Good job.




 

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