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'Tis me across the Sea
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:06:46 PM in AEST
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the soul that sees beauty
may sometimes walk alone.
~johann von goethe~
from your lovely old garden of eire
you've brought to me great passions and desires,
an' when the sun of summersong kisses the skies
we will know the truth in one another's eyes,
our hearts..
our souls..
our bodies..
our sighs..
upon my cliffs of mountain bluegrass
our passions will soar an' ever last,
like the beige breasted song of morning doves
come deep into me from across the sea, my love,
merging in our expressions, looks and firey touch
come deeply within' my lovin' depths, your loved so much,
yes, come into me darlin'
and amongst my branches search,
i will bloom within' your woodlands
breasts arched by your lovin' caressing hands,
summer will be the time for you, the time for me
whilst taking little breaks from our loving,
for toast and tea..
hypnotically lost within' the beauty of your eyes
make me feel everything from my roots to the skies,
returnin' to our quiet darkness alive in brilliant light,
resting upon your heart, my pillow, during the night,
our enthusiastic ardent longings, trustings, yet untried
let us fill our desires, yearnings, ardor, side by side,
aye, carry with you the fairies, let them spirit us away
lingering in the chambers of our heartfelt lovin' ways,
come to me my darlin' and let me love ye yet but more
love me, love me deeply sweetly, alas for evermore.
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ladyfawn
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 08:06:49 PM AEST
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Wow..grrlfriend..this was so beautiful.....
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 12:29:09 AM AEST
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| Oh, soooooo sensuous ..... |
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 03:08:19 PM AEST
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| Amazingly beautiful !! And makes one tingle too ;o) Love it! Larry |
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 03:41:14 PM AEST
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entwined for an eternity
exchanging dreams in spirit only
in th cause of creativity
where all creation is conceived
and yet shall we be birthed
unto the heaven that is earth
and entwine in dream's fulfillment
neath the beauty of the firmament
.......an eternity would'nt be long enough to describe all the love you cause........love you |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:06:49 PM AEST
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| hi thanx for your comment, and i love this one! it's really beautiful. |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 12:12:16 PM AEST
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Like the river of words, The soundless words.
Full of passions where no more of sounds but deep deep sighs.
Fayaz |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 11:17:29 PM AEST
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*fans herself*
Getting kinda hot in here :)
A very sweet and sensual poem.
Yvonne |
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Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:59:42 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is stunning, I think I'm hyponized, great words they are so full of passion, make sure you send it to him ( yes, I know) hugs and love, Val |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:24:21 AM AEST
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| i love this, from the style you used and the descriptive manner... excellent sensual loving poem... blessings... |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:45:30 PM AEST
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| so sensual and beautifuly written! perfect description on everything, this is erotic with fashion! |
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Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 04:06:24 PM AEST
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wow nessa, another truly fantasic write, its completely beautiful...
made me want someone to love me for a while...
Phil is one lucky man and as long as he treats you right, we will all be happy for you
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:25:40 PM AEST
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........speechless, what a great poem! Sensual full of love and passion. I loved it, great ......still fighting to gain thinking and speech ability.......
Anne :D |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:07:46 PM AEST
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simply beautiful - I don't know what else to say as we have talked so much - made me teary eyed - {{{{{{nessa}}}}}}}}}}}}
your spirit sister
merry |
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:43:38 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful, thank you |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Nice poem.
Scott |
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Re: Re: 'Tis me across the Sea
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Is it hot in here or is it just me? ;-)
What a wondrous beauty this poem be! |
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