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Dripping Wet
Contributed by
Merry
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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hot watery hands caress my flesh
I lean my head against cool tiles
your name runs across my lips
while the last hint of your musky love
washes away with herbal scent
leaving only a memory between my thighs
weakness slips its sin into me
like your spirit rising from the steam
I hear your deep throated laugh
your kiss sublime and coaxing
anything you want from me
on my knees, eyes half closed imagining
your clever hands knead my breasts
exciting constellation of tactile delight
while I hold on to you with a low down kiss
insistent reminders dance like shadows
that you are a man made of mist
a man that does not really exist
I love you and hate you at the same time
I look at you and don’t know why
you leave me dripping wet
~merry~
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Merry
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2003-10-01 07:20:31]
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Re: Re: Dripping Wet
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Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:51:14 PM AEST
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| Merry ... this is sublime - very very sensuous ... love the last line ... well, I love all of it actually, lol ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Re: Dripping Wet
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Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 03:42:47 PM AEST
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Oh yeah Merry..oh yeah. Steaming up the windows here .Very erotic..and down right hot!! lol.. ;o)
Larry |
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Re: Re: Dripping Wet
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Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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| Well merry, this is a sublime write. quite ammusing makes me giggle at your last line..very nice..if you could find time have a look at my poems also..venkat |
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Re: Re: Dripping Wet
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Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:22:46 PM AEST
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I'm logging out to find my husband. Thanks!
Philipa |
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Re: Re: Dripping Wet
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:23:48 PM AEST
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| THIS POEM HAS GOTTEN ME DRIPPING WET WISH YOU WERE HERE TO FINISH ME OFF |
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