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making a monster

Contributed by Cancer on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:19:57 AM in AEST
Topic: Badlanguage



screaming and beating
your words and your fists can't touch
what's inside me
growing to hate you, abusive fuck
worthless piece of shit
the name i've been cursed to bear
one day i'll show you
what your words and your fists have borne

FUCK UP
WORTHLESS PIECE OF SHIT
FUCK UP
CAN'T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT
FUCK UP
NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING
FUCK UP
RAISED ON HATE, DESTINED TO FEEL.....

you never gave me a chance
to prove myself to you
passed judgement before
i was old enough to speak
created a monster
riddled with scars
i won't be young forever
one day you will have to pay

FUCK UP
WORTHLESS PIECE OF SHIT
FUCK UP
CAN'T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT
FUCK UP
NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING
FUCK UP
RAISED ON HATE, DESTINED TO FEEL......

i'll never be good enough
to make you feel proud
i'll never accomplish anything
that you won't tear down
i'll never feel like
you don't wish i were dead
but your hate fed me well
and soon you will answer to

YOUR FUCK UP
YOUR WORTHLESS PIECE OF SHIT
YOUR FUCK UP
WHO CAN'T DO ANYTHING RIGHT
YOUR FUCK UP
WHO'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING
YOUR FUCK UP
RAISED ON HATE, DESTINED TO FEEL......
THE SAME (for you)




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-06-23 00:19:57]
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Re: Re: making a monster (User Rating: 1 )
by on Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 06:00:05 PM AEST
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wow... so much emotion, i can relate so much to this poem omg i completely loved it... ~Apryl


Re: Re: making a monster (User Rating: 1 )
by on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:49:15 PM AEST
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sad, but a great way to vent your anger, good poem


Re: Re: making a monster (User Rating: 1 )
by on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:24:31 AM AEST
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you can truely feel your pain as you read this poem


Re: Re: making a monster (User Rating: 1 )
by on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 01:25:11 PM AEST
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That poem hurt my eyes. Good job with it all though. Butterat Zool.




 

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