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Already Dead
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:10:24 AM in AEST
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Already dead, buried alive, consistent failures
Running too long on empty, crash into brick wall
Spell out disaster with alphabet soup
Did I hear someone yell about that practice?
Coughing up hair balls, chugging down coffee
Insomnia eats my brain cells by the spoonful
Providing little else to think about
Inconsequential love interest leaves me again
Too something or other, for him to comprehend
Eventually all this will end in gasping death at 83
No one there will remember me; fill out the paperwork
Pass me along to the undertaker, poor old thing
Dust to dust, torch me up, off I go in a puff of smoke
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-27 09:10:24]
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Re: Re: Already Dead
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:54:21 AM AEST
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i know this is all gloomy and like doomy but i loved it and it made me smile, maybe it was the 'puff of smoke', lol, *will read it again with my serious face:)* hugs n' loves ya, nessa
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Re: Re: Already Dead
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Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:53:24 PM AEST
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| this certainly was original. i liked the rhythm and the ending. the first time i didnt really like the verses you used, and after rereading it a few times, they grew on me, and im glad that i gave this poem a chance, with rereading it and not just disliking it on the first read. |
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