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Tapped Imagination

Contributed by kie on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:30:07 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



If letters cast in bottles can float upon the sea
I hope there will be poetry in heaven just for me
With cards of old nostalgia, the way it used to be
Each memory imprinted, oh the many I will see

If leaves can hang on branches thru a summer's storm
Why can't I be a mermaid and sunbathe past the shore?
I'd lie upon a rock and call Poseidon's name
Curved in subtle wonder, without a hint of shame

If cultures that are ancient developed aqueducts
My map of life needs laughter not to mention luck
The things I find important will not outlast my time
What is real achievement when measured by a dime?

If Alice found in Wonderland, wisdom with no sense
I smile to know that my advice is worth a bout a pence
Like twirling 'round a lamppost, dancing in the rain
My tapped imagination will never be the same






Copyright © kie ... [ 2005-06-23 06:30:07]
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Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:37:54 AM AEST
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*applauds*
A beautiful,thought provoking write.

Well Done!

LW


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:39:51 AM AEST
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Hi Kie

I love this!! It has excellent flow and breathtaking imagery, I could envision you as a mermaid, I love your imagination!!

Excellent poem

Love Dawny


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 07:19:51 AM AEST
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Excellent imagination..Thought provoking question..I like this my dear friend:-)venkat


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:32:31 AM AEST
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Gosh!!! Kie that was bloody marvelous, I love your imagination it’s always spot on.

Cool write.

Jane xoxo


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 09:10:29 AM AEST
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Brilliant work here, Kie. I like the mermaid, personally, lol.

Rita


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:17:54 PM AEST
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Kie, Wonderful you have really let your imagination run wild on this poe.I like it and would like to place it on my guests poems on my url for poetry.Please let me know all the best from bernard.


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:00:43 PM AEST
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love that poem.. its really good.... u are so creative... keep it up....
TiffanyShay


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:47:56 PM AEST
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a beaut as always kie Michelle loves your work huge hugssssss
Michelle


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:48:59 PM AEST
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oooooo this is an awesome poem. i love the imagery and ur good use of imagination
totally awesome i loved it
good job
~Kortnie~


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:21:30 PM AEST
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Imagination, indeed yes, but the madness is debatable (personally I think you have the same sort of madness that I do, just are a less -or more?- hopeless case).

Beautiful, wistful words. A bit inspiring, too. I never tire of these kind of poems. Well done.

Andrew


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:08:27 PM AEST
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You are wise beyond your years and don't

even know it, then ironicaly, true gienus is

not wise enough 2 understand it's own

validity, 4 get the poem, u get this praise

as a friend, u r a remarkable human being . . .

Ben


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:54:24 PM AEST
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beautiful and insightful poem Kie. It is good
to see you back I haven't heard from you or
spoken to you in such a long time! Again I
loved this and you better not leave again!

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 09:51:17 AM AEST
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Well its indeed a lovely poem.
Though your rhyming shame bothered me. it didnt flow well and felt choppy. and it feels as if you wondered a bit in the poem. and i think it should of had a subject matter.
but then again that is only my opinion.
it was a very lovely poem. well done.
4/5
-Rebekah


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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Good write girl.
I too am very happy to see u back. This place misses u when u arn't writing your unique writes.
Missed u girl.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:26:14 PM AEST
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You had a few different ideas floating around in this write which made it an enjoyable read for me...Nice job!

Scorp.


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:39:08 PM AEST
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And my dear Kie, neither will your poetry. For imagination is always half of what you write. And you have always had a wonderful knack....to see and imagine the unimaginable!!!!! This poem was so like you, Kie. Your poetry always sets me free while I read of your thoughts galore. What a marvelous thinking you are, and we all benefit from your lore!!!
Wonderful!
Warm love
consue


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:25:06 AM AEST
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I adore this! This, I think, is rather how a poet sees life.... that wonderful, wonder-filled if/then consideration of the world. I love the opening "if" to each stanza (especially the second stanza)... moreover, I concur (oh! I most certainly do!) with the thought process here. All things are possible, I think... and there are millions of fabulously wonderful (sadly, often overlooked) small-ish miracles that may be referenced as evidence of this. We're limited only... by our own (*sigh* all too often restricted) thinking.

Dream big, mermaid you --- and keep dancing!

~Snem~
(who.... hmmmm... is, for the first time in a while, feeling inspired for having read this)



Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:52:00 PM AEST
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Original, a great flow and rythm to this.
It's also a wonderful tribute to imagination!
Very fanciful and creates wonderful images.
Well done!!!!!!


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:13:29 AM AEST
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well im just adding to the already bunches of comments here and agreeing with them. this poem is beautiful, imaginative. it truly takes you away to another place. ...and you asked if i ever read a poem that when i finished i said (WoW)..my answer? - yes. and this is one of them. great job.


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:40:59 PM AEST
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as always... a wonderful delight to read... what such words ... and the meaning behind them all... you are truely gifted girlie... i have a lot of catching up to do... hope all is well with you... and never quit writing .. :) :) :)


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:54:51 PM AEST
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I love this! A perfect write for sure. It's cute
but inspirational at the same time. The
rhyme and rhythm are perfect, it contributes
to the optimistic feel of the poem. I really
wish you had more poems on here.


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 06:40:37 AM AEST
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Kylie, your mind is a thing of wonder. You're always telling me you have no inspiration, then I read something like this and smile, shake my head in wonder at how you can be so unaware of your talent. This is an amazing bit of writing from a pen filled with magic. More..I want more poetry from you !!!

Roses at your feet
L


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:33:02 PM AEST
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An imagination as fertile as yours is such a blessing. Never be the same? Maybe not.
Be something better...enhanced...renewed?
I don't doubt it for a moment.
Stitch


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:38:30 PM AEST
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WoW a brillant masterpiece in its own rights. You're a truly talented writer who has such a flare with her pen. An absolutely outstanding and remarkable piece of poetry. You rock girl. Keep it up.
Hugs,
Dreamer


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 09:16:08 PM AEST
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Indeed a beaut write that maybe might inspire more writers[like me] to write with imagination....as you have the 'nack 'to write so brilliantly!!!
thankyou for inspiring
coni


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by CrazyCowboy557 on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:40:00 PM AEST
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Wow, This is just a wonderful poem. I love the use of Poseidon and the imagery used. You can now consider me a fan of your work, and hope to see more of it.

William


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:51:50 PM AEST
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This is good and by the way where are all your poems?

This one was awesome!


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:29:46 AM AEST
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I cannot add a thing so many good comments.Easy to read and I loved your imagination in this piece. I think I shall go swiming in search of a mermaid. : )

Sinned


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by outdoorsman on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 04:27:43 PM AEST
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Nice- I really enjoyed this one. a beautiful thought!- J o


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 01:28:13 AM AEST
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sweetie this is so beautiful! exquisite images,
rhyme, and flow, just brilliant, like you! miss you
my friend! what the heck did you do with your
lovely poetry??!!

big hugs, woofies n' love nessa



Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 16th August 2020 @ 07:07:17 PM AEST
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Absolutely lovely..............


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by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 01:07:41 AM AEST
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Awesome


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by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 01:08:20 AM AEST
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Awesome


Re: Tapped Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 01:08:21 AM AEST
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Awesome




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