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my soul you live in

Contributed by ladyfawn on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:48:14 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty










all i need to do to see you is close my eyes,
memory of your face gives me butterflies,
with your laughter, charm and flare
thank you for always being there,

where love ever flows like a clear stream
during the nights you live in my dreams,
and all is safe and you are really here
i wish if i open them you will appear,

of the whole world; this my favorite place
lying in bed in each other's embrace,
oh, let me be as a bat, in love, blind
for thus in dreams you'll live in my mind,

for those times when dreams we must let go
when the day moves in and the stars seem far,
as the day passes, there you are in my heart
for this is one place you will never part,

when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real,
as the wind blows upon my skin
for it is my soul you live in.

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Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:55:27 AM AEST
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That was just beautiful...
Perfection in a bottle, nothing more to say that was just really really really great.

Jane~


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by emystar on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:58:12 AM AEST
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Awesome write, Nessa.
Beautifull love that shines in this masterpeice.
Good to catch ya posting a gain.
luv, huggs, take care,
emy


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by sandysandysandy on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:02:19 AM AEST
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I thought i would read a few poems this morning. I didn't Know that I was going to cry and be in awee of your work. The music made it reach the top of the list of fine poetry. Thanks.


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:06:32 AM AEST
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What a beautiful title..."my soul you live in".
marvellous poetry with tender emotions so beautifully touching the heart and soul:
"when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real, as the wind blows upon my skin for it is my soul you live in"...its great..great Nessa..hugs n love
sincerely:-) venkat



Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:15:17 AM AEST
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You ARE a true poet in the making....As
-always- a great poem.. never have I read a bad one of yours...simply beautiful.
cheers!~


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 06:29:46 AM AEST
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Oh my this brought tears to my eyes. It was so very beautiful and the music also.

Excellent

Love Angelxxxx


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:56:08 AM AEST
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Nessa you absolutely blew me away with this sheer masterpiece. An amazing poetess u really are. A superb write.
Hugs,
~Sue~


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:03:28 AM AEST
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stunning.

johnny.


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:23:04 AM AEST
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wow awsome.

hugs


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 03:47:10 PM AEST
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oh my princess of poetry has returned and took my breath away once again with her lovely words
(Nessa))
love you
Michelle


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:52:14 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful.

Scott


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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wow Nessa *huggies* gosh I hve missed you so much that was so deep and beautiful and so moving, I loved it!!!!!

take care
Pix xx


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:03:03 AM AEST
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How very romantic, How very lovely, How very loving indeed!
It's true love you need
dear LadyFawn..........I'm still praying........
Warm love,
Lovingcritters
consue


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:17:01 AM AEST
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wow nessa...awsome romantic piece.
Just what I would picture love to be all about...wonderful!!!


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:56:21 PM AEST
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Oh, fawny.

Stop writing love poems to me.

--Ghosty


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:47:00 PM AEST
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That's such a beautiful poem! I felt that way, so happy, when I was with Jesse, but no more, he doesn't trust me anymore. I'm now depressed :'( I still see him in my dreams at night, however. I wish he could come back to me. So that he can forgive me. I hope you're happy with that person. Jenny


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:57:34 AM AEST
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Nessa ... there are few who do love poetry as well as you. This is beautiful.

Nazzy ~


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:40:00 AM AEST
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Less is more...
There is a simplicity within this piece which compliments love, itself, so well.
A time-stopping, heart fluttering write.


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:05:17 PM AEST
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Great poem. I have not read your poems very often as of late. I think I have been missing out. This is very inspiring.


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by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:50:24 PM AEST
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Ohhh hun this is so gorgeous! I'm sure he's looking down on you at this minute now with a beautiful smile directed just at you. This is so beautifully written my darling dear, the words fall out of my mouth so easily... Beautiful write from the beautiful soul that is you.

Take care always
Love you
- Becca


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:27:40 PM AEST
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The beauty of these romantic words and flow, along with the beauty of the music are spellbinding. I find I drift to a fairyland type of place....so dreamy and emotionally soothing.

A masterpiece

Will


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:04:35 AM AEST
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NO WONDER SO MANY HAVE READ THIS,IT'S POETRY IN MOTION,WITH A SWEET KISS,& SOMETHING ONLY LOVE CAN BE HOSTING! PLEASE KEEP TEACHING US HOW TO WRITE,SO WE TOO CAN FINALLY PROVE,THAT LOVE IS A LIGHT, & SHINES SO BRIGHT ON THE HEARTS IT DOES MOVE!! YOU'RE GREAT -
LADYFAWN!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by kaosar on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:44:47 AM AEST
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Actually I can't find the words to express how this wonderful poem let me feel. the words , the music , the feelings .. they all made me live the story . it's marvellous!


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:30:40 PM AEST
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Let me tell you... that was extremely nice. I feel pacified by reading it, very good... you have once again impressed me as you have done many times before... But, this does give pause to one question:

How's the rent like in your soul? Are the morgage rates high... I think I would like to live there too.

I enjoyed it.

Aq.


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by Jenni_K on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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Oh Ness.....Better late than never....You are truly an inspiration to all the poets on YPDC... Never once has a poem of yours disappointed me.... Don't ever give up writing..
Great to see you posting again.
Love and woofies..
Jenni


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by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:59:13 PM AEST
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Awww Nessa sorry I'm so late in commenting on this, but I've been so busy lately...

This is so beautiful, very powerful, sweet, deep and moving....stirred me to tears (ha. and i'm on my school lunch break right now :p)

Totally awestruck...
~kt


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:23:50 AM AEST
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I have no words for this truely romantic piece of love poetry at its best. Excellent love from bernard.


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:11:28 PM AEST
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This was a really impressive piece of writing. I always love it when people pay such close attention to a rhyme scheme in their works, it's something I have yet to properly harness myself. It was so refreshing to see it in your piece. The subject matter was something I love reading about, and the words you've chosen to express yourself were picked with a certain level of skill that made everything click. A beautiful piece.


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by freckle on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:01:31 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem. Very beautiful words and flow. I liked the music too...peaceful and lovely.

Carol


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by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:31:02 PM AEST
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beautiful poem written from the heart,,I thought this was fantastic...


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:45:52 PM AEST
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wow awsome.


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Crimson_Valley on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:55:10 PM AEST
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Nessa... That is the most perfect poem I have EVER read!! That is just so good, one day I want to write like you. By the way... Where'd you get the song? Title? Artist? I wanna get that song. It's too good to be possible.


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by Former_Member on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:55:44 AM AEST
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I had to find room to leave a comment! Good thing I found it because I don't know how I missed this one! Your words speak of the true love of a soul mate that no other love can ever compare to. Nessa, this is a beautiful piece for the man in your soul. He will Always live there. God bless! Joni


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by Former_Member on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:34:01 AM AEST
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Lovely thoughts. I like the first two lines of the third stanza the best. Your poem is so full of the naturalness of a love relationship. Excellent work!


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by lovestruck on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:15:06 PM AEST
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I'm new so I've only read a couple of your poems... but of the ones I have read their utterly amazing, so beautiful, and tender I wish I could write like that
-taylor


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by hauntedscorp on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:01:52 PM AEST
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Wow---way to go! This is really well written, so descriptive and full of life and loss. Well done. Scorp.


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by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa this is lovely, and true......we've been so blessed just to have one, some never do! The memories alone can keep us going, and the last line is so endearing...my soul you live in. They were our soul mates, jusr because they are gone doesn't keep our soul from not longing and hanging on.
And thank you my dear friend for all your lovely comments on my poems also...you are too generous and kind Nessa dear
Warm Love
consue


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by Former_Member on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:25:37 PM AEST
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WOW! So beautifully written. It's such a sincere and heartfelt write. Brilliant!


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:06:10 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful!

persia


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by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:44:49 AM AEST
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Gave me a really warm feeling inside.
Wonderful inspiring write

Steve


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by bernard on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:02:41 AM AEST
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Wonderful piece of love writing one of the best I have seen on this list.top marks from bernard.


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by lostinmyself on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:27:20 PM AEST
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Oh nessa... this made me cry.

The love in this is just so...true, and beautiful, and right.

I literally fell into your words.

And absolutely gorgeous write my friend,

*hugs tons* Phil xxx


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by thumper on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:58:15 AM AEST
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You truely have a beautiful soul, and it shines through in your poetry. This is just.......exquisite! Peace to you.
Thumper ; o)


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by jonteD on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:22:46 AM AEST
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wow indeed


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 10:03:12 AM AEST
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Nessa

Your love was truly special and blessed - it makes me cry to think how you have suffered - but I know you have such special memories to comfort you until you are reunited.
Love always sis
merry


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by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:13:47 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful Nessa:

Has to be beautiful when a beautiful soul speaks like this.

I got butterflies reading it. But not the hollow feeling, or queasiness type. Oh yes, it was emotional and lots of tender tension hit me, which is the type of anxious anticipation one has when they miss their true love in heaven. Oh this write sent me tears of joy, because it allowed me to feel my first husbands soul.

I love how you said ...

*****for it is my soul you live in.

because I have kept my first husband encirling my heart for many years. Some may think it strange, but when you truly love a person, and God takes them from you, you just have to have something to hold onto. Its hard to let go of their soul, believe me I know.

Your write was the affected expression of happy grief if there is any such thing.

Raquel Leah






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by Stellar on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 01:00:04 AM AEST
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"when i smell a new rose its your smile i feel
you are the one who made my life real,
as the wind blows upon my skin
for it is my soul you live in."

Ahh, that gave me chills. This is so beautiful!

God Bless,
Lizzie


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by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:06:09 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa, - how I identify with your beautiful words. On September 30th is the anniversary of my beloved husbands death, September the great month of Severance. Severance of all I had in this ea rthly life.
And yet, he lives in my soul inspires me, although I must admit Anniversaries cause pain, I wish there were no anniversaries- they are only in time, not in the soul's true home.,

as the day passes, there you are in my heart
for this is one place you will never part,"
Oh how true!.
Thank you for reminding us that Anniversaries do not mean much vs. the Eternal Presence.
Love and Hugs
Elizabeth


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by ingeniusidiot on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 11:56:13 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. It is amazing how you captured love upon a piece of paper in your words. Once again this was truly beautiful.

Rich


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by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:20:10 PM AEST
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a quite beautiful poem. great job.

-phil


Re: my soul you live in (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:27:16 PM AEST
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your poetry really reaches the heart




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