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* Love breeze *

Contributed by venkat on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:16:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



* * *
Like an aerial car of songs
You’re flowing like breeze
Unseen; how can I see you?
Where can I search for you?
Not even a minute if you
Are not there I can’t breathe
In sleep my eyes are closed
You’re like a dream behind
My eye lids, when I opened
Them you have disappeared
Like a flash of lightening;
Are you not my soul singing
Like a waterfall in my heart?
14-7-2004




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Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:23:34 AM AEST
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Ahh I could almost feel that breeze, my friend....
Jenni


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:32:04 AM AEST
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A lovely write...


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:36:38 AM AEST
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Thank you for your lovely words;
Cheers Robert.. (Kamalalaksa). Jaya Om Shi Krishna


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:41:41 AM AEST
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Short but very sweet. great write
-jt-


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:11:47 AM AEST
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Absoutely amazing...I kid you not. I love the choice of words here, it is very dreamy and heartwrenching for some reason...excellent write as usual.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:37:56 AM AEST
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Such exquisite beauty in such small verse. You never cease to amaze me.

Rita


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:47:20 AM AEST
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Very sweet expression from a spiritual soul..


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:02:18 AM AEST
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another beautiful write from you Venkat...

your lil pixie friend...

xxx


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:13:10 AM AEST
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Your words flow like a warm breeze on a summers day,ever fragrant, yet warms you inside. Your soul sings while it sleeps, and brings forth abundant beauty as it is awake.
A true spirited soul!!! Short, but evocative.
Angel always...joni


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by jonteD on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:50:52 PM AEST
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Where is the love that leaves our hearts hurt?

Great write


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:51:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful my dear friend. Your words are so crystal clear and a balm to a tired poets heart. I loved the last two lines really ended the poem well i thought.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:52:56 PM AEST
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Your poems are soooo Beautifully written.....
I hope my poems will get as good some day...


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:30:46 AM AEST
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How unique, and gentle and surprizing all rolled into one VenKat...kind sir.
How lovely to say a 'waterfall in my heart!"
I can picture that so plainly....
Out of your usual beautiful writes Venkat,
but always lovely and unqiue indeed!
Enjoyed this one tremendously.
Poetic hugs,
consue
Thank you for letting me know! I wouldn't want to miss it!


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:11:59 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. I am espeacially fond of the last 2 lines


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:24:11 AM AEST
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lovely as always, refreshing and clear like water falling.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:16:21 AM AEST
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beautiful poem as always venkat.
great work.
i enjoyed it very much :)
Arden


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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Beautifull, tantalizzing write.
huggs,
emy


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:29:01 PM AEST
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beautifully powerful poem of love, the ending is so breathtaking:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:24:06 AM AEST
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beautiful poem great job

Brandy


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:46:04 AM AEST
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great work, i loved that image of the waterfall in the heart well done once again.

wildejohnny.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:07:01 PM AEST
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Eloquent and wonderful.
Your poems on love never fail to captivate me.
With each of your poems, I'm longing more and more to find love in my life.
Excellent choice of words.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:39:48 AM AEST
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Very beautiful verse....Love the line "like a waterfall in my heart".

WinterFawn


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:07:23 AM AEST
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An image in the mist, may the sun not rise to burn away that mist.......and may I dwell in the twilight of the dawn for all time.

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:39:06 AM AEST
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A beautiful write Venkat.
Gentledove


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:51:31 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:11:47 AM AEST
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Yes, our hearts sing when we're in love! And we dream of our love's also. You have a knack for capturing emotions very well. :o) Write on, Venkat, write on!!
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 07:03:35 PM AEST
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Love is a breeze indeed.. for it is as fleeting as it often is. How often do we find it floating in the clouds but it is always insubstantial whenever we reach out.

A skillfull rendition indeed of the fleeting feel of LOVE! Masterful piece of work.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:07:29 AM AEST
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beautiful, i was rapt from start to finish.

some of your similes are breathtaking.


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:51:45 AM AEST
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Venkat, I loved all the poem...but love the last line expecially!
So talented thou are~
cheers!~


Re: * Love breeze * (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:00:23 AM AEST
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Ah, Love.... I miss it. Well captured thoughts. May love always abound in your life. A great poet deserves a great love.
Take care.
David




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