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in a whisper

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:32:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry













fell fast asleep and
dreamed the sweetest dream
but then when i woke up

you were right there with me,
oh, let it remain dark
save us from light of day
these moments timeless

are we swept away?
you've been my friend
through the years
when i was down, you

kissed away my tears,
in a whisper my heart
says you know it too
but don't mention love

that stuffs never true,
in each the other's arms
is where we should stay
whatever we are it simply

will not fade to grey,
whatever this is; let's not
let it sail out of sight,
just keep me in your arms tonight.

§* *§
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Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:50:53 AM AEST
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aand a beautifull whisper it is they sing.
Yeah, I hear um singing in this write.
Awesomely beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:08:20 AM AEST
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wonderful, beautiful, amazing - really enjoyed this one - seems like it was from the heart - which is always good!!

well done!!!



Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:14:34 AM AEST
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This is another fine write by in my opinion one of the best encouragers on the site.


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:29:50 AM AEST
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Aw I'm usually not one for corny poetry but this is sooo sweet. (Or I'm just growing up.)

just keep me in your arms tonight.
*sniffle*


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:39:57 AM AEST
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simply beautiful

Shari


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:36:31 AM AEST
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I have to voice what has already been said, this is beautiful, amazing and a trully wonderful piece of work,

pixie xx


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:40:01 AM AEST
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Nessa, I hope they sing for you forever. It is time for you to hear music again in your heart.

Hugs,
Rita


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:31:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful as always Nessa.
Amazing.


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:45:35 AM AEST
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Mom!!!! I'm so happy for you and I hope it works out and..... oh! you should have told me!

This is..... hmm... *tries to find an adjective that everyone else hasn't already used* well... it's amazing... (sorry, I tried)...

Huggles and squeezes!!!!
xoxo Jaime


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:37:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I love it. Nice job.
Andrew


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:37:46 PM AEST
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Me thinks you're right!!!!
Loved this grrlfriend.....
Hugs and Woofies....
Jenni


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:43:28 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwww, Nessa . . . this one's one of the best ones I've seen from you in a while. Vividly beautiful (there MUST be a better adjective, I'm sure, but it escapes me right now :P) and it's great to see such a sweet, happy, romantic one from you . . .

May those birds always sing for you :).

--Nora


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:40:51 PM AEST
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nessa - this is truly beautiful, wistful, fragilly hopeful - - may it be all that you hope for

Hugs and Daisies for Sis

Merry


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:53:09 PM AEST
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Birds definitely have been singing havent they?
Thank you for sharing, nessa.
Absolutely beautiful.

Lindsey


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:03:04 PM AEST
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I'm so glad the birds are singing for you again Nessa dear.
You deserve someone to hold you in their arms............maybe not the fireworks you think? But sometimes those are the best kind. They will love you forever........and that's the very best kind of love there it!
Stay in his arms........enjoy his charms.....don't let this one get away!
love
consue


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:25:46 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem from a beautiful woman. This one is so sweet hon, great write

Hugs 'n Love
-becca


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:22:38 PM AEST
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Lovely, honest, and... real. Love comes to us in so very many ways... sometimes there aren't fireworks - but whispers can be wonderful too. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this!


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:28:53 PM AEST
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Ness, this is soft, calming, hopeful and all around one incredibly beautiful write. You deserve such happiness as this.

Roses
Larry


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:38:43 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:17:46 AM AEST
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it has a feather like gentle touch to the heart .
sweet and beautiful..very nicely done...
Oh..Nessa..hugs my friend.:-) venkat


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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CUTE & LOVING! UM ~ I LOVED IT!! WAY TO GO NESSA!!!

LOL~DAN!!!!


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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I like your poems they seem to have a way of effecting the reader, I definitely appreciate that .


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:15:53 AM AEST
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This is a very gentle and tender poem..very beautiful..

Lena


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFox on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:11:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, nessa..I enjoyed it very much...Mike


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:51:04 PM AEST
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Reading this penetrated every nerve in my body

Truly beautiful fantastic write lady I really enjoyed
Love Sweetangelukxxx


Re: in a whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:48:15 PM AEST
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'Symphonically' blends purpose meaning moods, object and subject spanned just by having lived. Your poem paints for the mind's eye, sings to the psyche of the human personality




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