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misty morning

Contributed by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:17:41 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry










the mist rolls in
on little dove wings
becoming thicker; overlooking

barn, treelines, mountain horizen
bringing subtle gentle cooing songs
to float along sky of morning doves
whilst nature sings

on silent haunches
wild things roam, frogs speak
one rabbit makes a hasty retreat
for this misty forest is their home

many times this mist she has seen
as into flowing river
drinking deer leans

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Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:38:04 AM AEST
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beautful misty mornings,,i could sit and watch it all day if it were possible,,to see the aminals play,joyfuly,,as the mornng mist lays apon them,
well written,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:40:45 AM AEST
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And doesn't it make the day start off just perfectly. I love looking down toward the pond and seeing the animals drinking and the little ones playing. Right now you can't even walk outside because we have millions of 1/2 baby frogs everywhere. They are adorable. This is a beautiful piece of heaven, Nessa.

Rita


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:42:51 AM AEST
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oh what beautiful stunning imagery, you do imagery best. i loved this poem. perfectly done, flawless.
well done.
Arden


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:02:59 PM AEST
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what a beautiful peaceful picture you have painted

Shari


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:08:05 PM AEST
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Congratulations on a wonderful nature poem. I caught the serenity and naturalness in this poem, Beautiful


bernard.


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:30:45 PM AEST
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What a beautiful nature poem .
I love it,
Thank you for sharing that with us. :)


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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ahhh, mom..... for a moment I was transported back to the wilderness of the mountains in my youth... Thank you for that....

xoxo Jaime


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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oh nessa this was so beautiful

HUGS((( )))

michelle


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:56:21 PM AEST
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This picture of your mountain home sounds so beautiful and serene Nessa ... love this write ... hugs Jan


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:04:22 PM AEST
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DW beat me to it! Yes this is a very nice place, thanks for sharing.

tt


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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Awwwwww, Nessa, this is gorgeous *smiles*. As vivid imagery as ever and I swear I could just about see that deer . . . the whole poem sounds very like Carl Sandburg's "Fog" (a good thing)-- ever read it? :)

--Nora


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:51:22 PM AEST
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hiya nora, no im not familiar with that poem but i am going to look it up, thankies:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:58:44 PM AEST
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Nessa, this was stunningly beautiful. I had the big picture in my mind. Nice work. *S* Cynthia


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:59:41 PM AEST
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Its hardly ever misty over here but you made it seem as if it is. Great imagery, seems to be your strong point. Calm and serenading. :)


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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oh nessa - I can see it and feel it in your words, the misty morning - such a peacful awakening to the new day - I love to hear the birds first thing in the morning, especially the doves. What a wonderful write,,,,,bravo sis


hugs
merry


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:14:14 PM AEST
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A MISTY DEW ONE OF LIFES GREAT THINGS AMONG THE FEW! PRETTY & ENLIGHTENING!! GREAT JOB!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:21:24 AM AEST
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well done..you have nicely brought a picture before my eyes..thanks...hugs..Nessa.. :-) venkat


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:39:09 AM AEST
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This Is A Beautiful Nature Poem Very Enjoyable Read :-) Loved It !!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:34:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful poetry, a good imagery!
Greetz,
Hur


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:57:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful hun, I loved it...read it three times

Love 'n lotsa hugs
- Becca


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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what a pretty picture you created.... how lovely... :) :) :) im such a lover of animals... :) :) :)


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:48:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful write and read.
Excellent talent you've showed.
Jeff


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:03:29 AM AEST
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Loving imagery, Nessa. So glad you are feeling up to writing again.
We just had snow in May.....covered all the pretty lilacs and took all the colors away!
This was stunningly beautiful
love you
consue


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:44:00 PM AEST
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Nessa-I loved everything about this poem...the flow of the writing and the delivery were absolutely awesome. U Go, Gurl!

Hugs-Faith


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:07:54 PM AEST
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Perfect imagery....great picture you have painted. I got lost in the moment....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:48:28 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of misty morning beauty.
Awesome.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:28:21 PM AEST
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I could just sit here and read that poem forever! that is a very good poem you wrote.


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:11:24 PM AEST
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I cant describe how much I adore your poems. They take me to places I never dreamed of and I can see exactly what is happening as your magical words unfold. It opens up a story that is so loving.

Kisses,
~Soulless~


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:17:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery Nessa. One day when I have a few hours spare, I'm going to read all your poems, they just keep getting better!!

Really liked this one ((hugs))

Love Dawny x


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:47:01 AM AEST
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You show a great eye for nature in this poem.


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:17:10 AM AEST
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Ah mist is good topic, the prettier and less foreboding version of fog lol. A very surreal sounding almost fantasy like poem. It makes me think of Ireland, Scotland or any of the Celtic Isles where you always see those really nice pictures of green grass, rocky mountians, and always looming fog. Just as a curiosity why does everybody always keep the subject as Re: whatever it struck me as a bit odd. Anyway thanks for reviewing Terra...I write review not comment because I like the idea of a review over a comment...it implies a more thoughout responce and/or criticism.


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:43:49 PM AEST
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What a beautiful picture you have painted with your words....simply lovely..

Lena


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:15:35 PM AEST
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Not to be mean but i don't really like it i mean there are writers on here who write better than that and get no attention!
Sorry ~Shelbi


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:26:17 PM AEST
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Love it mom. :D You nailed where we live right on the head.


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by earthman on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:55:58 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, i believe you caught mother nature by the pen.
it was great reading this
i heard my own style of describing moments in nature, in this poem.
thoughtful touches thoughout misty morning
and not so heavy it became foggy mourning
(laughs) like more than a few of mine do. ; )
~earthman


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 11:23:50 PM AEST
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So beautiful a peice to read and savor, and carry in one's heart for ever and who know's
where else. Simply splendid . . .


((((Nessa))))



Ben


Re: misty morning (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:26:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!! Enchanting imagery; what a treat to read.
Peaceful and smile-inducing.



~Scorp




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