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Anorexical Debut
Contributed by
smg
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Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 06:41:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Feed me with poison, Feed me with pain, Melt me'n oblivion, Leave me insane! Throw me a reason, Sell me its vain... Sweep my addiction To most blue rain.
Feed me with fire, Feed me on ride, Turn on my power, Hide me inside, Squeeze my desire, Throw me in pride, Close my last hour, Let me decide.
Into my cryin' Allow me dive, Forget my dyin', Leave me alive, When see me lyin' Remember rive, Feed me while flyin', Feed me and drive!
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2002-07-15 06:41:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Anorexical Debut
(User Rating: 1 ) by Haligh on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:05:54 AM AEST (User
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I like it...but it would be easier to understand with better grammar (I know that you obviously wanted it with the grammar it has, but I found it hard to comprehend some of it). |
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