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She Wants To Sleep But ...

Contributed by Saira on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



When she lies on the bed to sleep,
Pain unlocks the door and seeps
Through the wounded pores and peeps
Into her broken mind and speaks
To her blistered soul that she keeps,
Reminds her of the pain so deep.

Vain strenuous efforts to have some peace,
Distorted dreams give her the creeps,
Snarling darkness emits reek
Of bitter memories, gloomy eyes weep,
Everything looks so hazy and bleak,
Twists her head and makes it reel.

And before she starts to, the word ‘worse’, feel,
Slowly prays again and tries to get some sleep.




Copyright © Saira ... [ 2003-07-19 18:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:47:11 PM AEST
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awww! vividly sad and well written, may you have peace in your soul and a song of happiness in your heart, hugs n' love nessa


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:44:36 PM AEST
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such a deep and moving poem beautiful but sad nicely put together
michelle


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 09:01:41 PM AEST
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this was written oh so beautifully, but so dishearteningly sad

Shari


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 12:28:57 AM AEST
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Sad and moving..but lovely..
Jenni


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:49:02 AM AEST
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I hope your words come to live one day. Thank you dear friend Nessa for reading and commenting on my poem.
God bless you!
Saira


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:51:17 AM AEST
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Wow... awesome rhyme scheme. Beautiful, beautiful poem.

~ Moonlit


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:52:55 AM AEST
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Thank you my friend Michelle for your vivid understanding.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:56:53 AM AEST
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Thank you dear friend Shari for your vivid understading. Sadden me to my core while writing it.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 08:01:08 AM AEST
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Thank you Moonlit for reading and liking my poem. :o)


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 08:02:36 AM AEST
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Thank you dear friend Jenni for your kind remarks.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 01:19:52 AM AEST
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very well written, touching. Crow


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by yesterdaysfool on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 03:41:21 AM AEST
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Great peom. I have felt that way many times. i love it!! Good job darlin'


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:36:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem Saira. I myself find that I am the most naive to my feelings at night whilst lying in bed. Your poem deeply touched me for that reason. Thank you...


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 08:49:32 AM AEST
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Thank you my friend for your kind remarks.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 08:58:24 AM AEST
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Thanks dear friend for liking and leaving your kind remarks.
God bless you!


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:06:01 AM AEST
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These are a few feelings I have expressed, sometimes feel even more than this. It's true :o(
Thank you dear friend for liking and leaving your kind comment.
God Bless you!


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:45:47 PM AEST
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It is very nice poem, Saira.
I like it very much.

Allah Hafiz.

Ashraf Gohar Goreja


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 07:00:40 PM AEST
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Thank you Sir for your kind remarks.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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Dear Saira,
I was deeply moved by your description of words, Saira. It amazes me that you are so well read, and your vocabulary has such extention that you can rhyme almost ever single word. Terrific job! Try practicing "Positive" thinking. That has always helped me. Perhaps the reason we think such negative thoughts at night is because we are alone, and we are tired from the stress of the day! When a negative thought pops into your head, immediately replace it with a beautiful thought! Or place yourself in a gorgeous setting, such as a whole hillside of sunflowers on a warm sunny day! That's what I do, and it really works. Try it.
Sad, but so real I could feel your every emotion.
Warm Poetric Love,
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue
csz1914@msn.com


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 09:07:36 AM AEST
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Thank you dear Connie for your concern. I will surely try it :o)


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 06:12:34 PM AEST
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HI SAIRA,
THIS IS VERY WELL WRITTEN,KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITE.


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:41:24 PM AEST
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Hi Richard Cambell,
Thank you for your kind remarks. I'll try!
Saira


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:26:41 PM AEST
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Sad but great I like it 2thumbs up LOL. Kimmie_mac


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:26:52 PM AEST
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Sad but great I like it 2thumbs up LOL. Kimmie_mac


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 04:54:04 PM AEST
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Thank you very much dear :o)


Re: She Wants To Sleep But ... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:38:56 PM AEST
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May God bless everyone with a peaceful sleep. Excellent work!.Mashallah u r a very happy person in real life and may u always be...But iam amazed at the way u put painful emotions in words,U r a very good peotess.

love----Nida




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