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[title] => Down to the ground
[time] => 2020-06-01 05:38:39
[hometext] => a person gets a note from home..
[bodytext] => Every once in a while I jump back in here to read and leave a post, this is a very simple write, lyric and music... about a guy, and someone that loves him..hope you enjoy, and thanks if you give it a listen. the link below will let you do that hopefully.
https://streamable.com/x2kh69
v1
Do you think of me... when your far away
can you almost hear me calling..out your name.
does love always win the battles,
or are you far to far from home...
chorus:
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
v2
Are you ever coming home....or are the wars raging on...
I will leave the light on the mantle...come on in the door.
I will be here for you
and to make sure that you know....
chorus;
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
bridge:
Love is a constant thing that will never die,
count those blessing each day..
chorus;
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
tag:
I love you right down to the ground..
© Copyright 2020 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.
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Down to the ground
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 1st June 2020 @ 05:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Every once in a while I jump back in here to read and leave a post, this is a very simple write, lyric and music... about a guy, and someone that loves him..hope you enjoy, and thanks if you give it a listen. the link below will let you do that hopefully.
https://streamable.com/x2kh69
v1
Do you think of me... when your far away
can you almost hear me calling..out your name.
does love always win the battles,
or are you far to far from home...
chorus:
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
v2
Are you ever coming home....or are the wars raging on...
I will leave the light on the mantle...come on in the door.
I will be here for you
and to make sure that you know....
chorus;
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
bridge:
Love is a constant thing that will never die,
count those blessing each day..
chorus;
I will love you...until the Sun will not shine,
until the moon forgets to rise..
until this world stops truning round, and round.
I love you right down to the ground..
tag:
I love you right down to the ground..
© Copyright 2020 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.
Copyright ©
crow
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2020-06-01 05:38:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Down to the ground
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st June 2020 @ 07:59:06 AM AEST (User
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Waaay too cool, Lane!!!
The link works, btw. Love this.
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Re: Down to the ground
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 2nd June 2020 @ 02:01:01 AM AEST (User
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Lovely.... |
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Re: Down to the ground
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Thursday, 4th June 2020 @ 03:27:13 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done.
Invierno |
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Re: Down to the ground
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th June 2020 @ 08:47:41 AM AEST (User
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I like it,
the slow change,
in the tempo and
then, the ground,
the bottom note,
Chorus:
I will love thee, till the Sun don/'/t shine no more,
till the moon, doth forget to rise up in night sky,
when this world turns no more, or orbits
around anything, imploding upon itself
Kaboom!!!
the final crescendo... And sadly, it makes no sound at all.
Just kidding, it/'/s original and lyrical - great writing!
Peace!
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