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You had an abdominal aneurysm and you/'/re dead.
The infection spread to your stomach and you hid your illness from all of us.
You didn/'/t want to go to a hospital because doctors were people who you didn/'/t trust.

If we/'/d known how sick you were, you would/'/ve seen a doctor immediately because we would/'/ve made you go.
When we found out how sick you were, you were too ill to put up a fight, you were too ill to be able to say no.
You were taken to Fort Sanders Hospital in Knoxville but sadly, it was too late.
You suffered tremendously before you died, you suffered a sad and tragic fate.

I woke up in the hospital and found you lying motionless in your bed.
When you had a deadly aneurysm, you would have no future ahead.
When I learned that you hid your illness from us, it made me feel pretty bad.
I love you Mom, you were the best mother that a person could/'/ve had. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 73 [topic] => 32 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Deadly Aneurysm

Contributed by randyjohnson on Friday, 6th March 2020 @ 11:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Your leg was infected and he infection spread.
You had an abdominal aneurysm and you/'/re dead.
The infection spread to your stomach and you hid your illness from all of us.
You didn/'/t want to go to a hospital because doctors were people who you didn/'/t trust.

If we/'/d known how sick you were, you would/'/ve seen a doctor immediately because we would/'/ve made you go.
When we found out how sick you were, you were too ill to put up a fight, you were too ill to be able to say no.
You were taken to Fort Sanders Hospital in Knoxville but sadly, it was too late.
You suffered tremendously before you died, you suffered a sad and tragic fate.

I woke up in the hospital and found you lying motionless in your bed.
When you had a deadly aneurysm, you would have no future ahead.
When I learned that you hid your illness from us, it made me feel pretty bad.
I love you Mom, you were the best mother that a person could/'/ve had.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2020-03-06 11:54:49]
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Re: Deadly Aneurysm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th March 2020 @ 04:16:41 AM AEST
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we become detached, and yet still love others.
we sometimes hide things about our own illness
to spare the ones we love. we do not wish to worry
those we ourselves worry about. life is hard all the way round, we try not to speak of it too much, we try not to come off as worry warts, so to speak.
the unforgettable moments, stuff that sticks with
any persons memory, should stay intact.
and sure, there were warts, they knew that about themselves, but that never stopped them from trying
their damndest to soldier on.
Peace!

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