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for pointing others failings out and dishing blunt abuse.
This poem is my virtual door closing in his face.
I wish him well, for I can tell that humans arent his taste.
Mother always told me I should learn from everyone;
I no longer wonder why some species eat their young.
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Things Hallmark Left Out

Contributed by softerware on Saturday, 8th February 2020 @ 01:43:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

He claimed to be intelligent. That was his excuse,
for pointing others failings out and dishing blunt abuse.
This poem is my virtual door closing in his face.
I wish him well, for I can tell that humans arent his taste.
Mother always told me I should learn from everyone;
I no longer wonder why some species eat their young.

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2020-02-08 01:43:21]
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Re: Things Hallmark Left Out (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Sunday, 9th February 2020 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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Caught my attention, I used to buy my dad Hallmark aftershave from boots years ago, it was expensive for me at the time as I was only a child but I felt good inside whenever I gave gifts because I cared more for others than myself,. This made me think of an encounter I had recently with a member of law enforcement who made me feel really bad even though I hadn/'/t done anything wrong, my son has issues n I try my best, but I am looked down on for never giving up on him, if he didn/'/t have me then who would look out for him?, I worry about that alot. Can you explain your thoughts on your above poem please, iam keen to hear your perspective x

Re: Things Hallmark Left Out (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Sunday, 9th February 2020 @ 10:23:50 PM AEST
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Caught my attention, I used to buy my dad Hallmark aftershave from boots years ago, it was expensive for me at the time as I was only a child but I felt good inside whenever I gave gifts because I cared more for others than myself,. This made me think of an encounter I had recently with a member of law enforcement who made me feel really bad even though I hadn/'/t done anything wrong, my son has issues n I try my best, but I am looked down on for never giving up on him, if he didn/'/t have me then who would look out for him?, I worry about that alot. Can you explain your thoughts on your above poem please, iam keen to hear your perspective x

Re: Things Hallmark Left Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th February 2020 @ 05:00:18 AM AEST
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Definitely. Very intriguing.

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