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Cometh forward my dearest into the blacken ashes of a new being

born both today and yesterday as well as tomorrow and yet the

old self remains forever trapped eternally within denial gates;

vying endearingly for a way out and forward in life both within

and underneath the underbelly of a sinner/'/s happiest reunion;

eternally scarred and yet the essence remains mostly unscathed

on the outer shell; surprisingly existing inside of a secret unspoken

lustful world often not seen by most and yet this secret world exist

and thrives as well within plain sight for all to plainly see and blindly

ignore.

Live long and prosper

Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 1.24.2020 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 8 [informant] => slogan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

the LiFe of You

Contributed by slogan on Thursday, 30th January 2020 @ 07:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

Cometh forward my dearest into the blacken ashes of a new being

born both today and yesterday as well as tomorrow and yet the

old self remains forever trapped eternally within denial gates;

vying endearingly for a way out and forward in life both within

and underneath the underbelly of a sinner/'/s happiest reunion;

eternally scarred and yet the essence remains mostly unscathed

on the outer shell; surprisingly existing inside of a secret unspoken

lustful world often not seen by most and yet this secret world exist

and thrives as well within plain sight for all to plainly see and blindly

ignore.

Live long and prosper

Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 1.24.2020

Copyright Â© slogan ... [ 2020-01-30 19:13:40]
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Re: the LiFe of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st January 2020 @ 08:49:46 AM AEST
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truthful to all.
An apparent insight
into life learned
to thee, to those,
to you.
I really like they way
you describe life here.
I think it is good advice
written in a way
that is non-judgmental
like some slanted truth
worth trying to learn more
about

and yet the old self remains
forever trapped eternally within
denial gates.
surprisingly existing inside of the secret
unspoken lustful world often not seen
by most and yet this secret world exist
and thrives as well within plain sight for all to plainly
see - and to a fault blindly ignore.

live well and prosper, live just live
for once, how long could you
stay never knowing this maybe

is only too long

Peace!

Re: the LiFe of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Wronglyaccused on Saturday, 1st February 2020 @ 09:19:09 PM AEST
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This sort of thinking you have is very warped. I loved you and only you with everything I had! There was never anyone else especially most of all where you think! I have worked extremely hard to get to where I am and would never mess that up! I loved you despite everything you said and did to me. I still do which in a sense makes me warped. I think you need to write about more truthful and happy times and get your mind out of this twisted make believe world! You lost someone who thought you were everything over this!

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