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Array ( [sid] => 186779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => King Eddy [time] => 2020-01-22 05:38:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dark and cozy,

playlist of metal and punk,

generous doubles -

above the 4 ounce standard;

I like this place.


The bartender’s drinking too;

looks like rum - dark and sweet -

neat.. my man!


no one bothers me,

I bother no one;

only sit and sip my drink,


peace.. solace.. tranquil..


listening to the montage

of dirty jokes

from the men center bar.


They laugh - not loudly,

they are quite old.. mousey..

squeaky voiced..


I chuckle as Skid Row skids

just outside the door -

it doesn’t come in

until after dark.


This city hasn’t much to

offer a redneck like me,

but I like this place. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 65 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Nightwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
King Eddy

Contributed by Nightwolf on Wednesday, 22nd January 2020 @ 05:38:07 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Dark and cozy,

playlist of metal and punk,

generous doubles -

above the 4 ounce standard;

I like this place.


The bartender’s drinking too;

looks like rum - dark and sweet -

neat.. my man!


no one bothers me,

I bother no one;

only sit and sip my drink,


peace.. solace.. tranquil..


listening to the montage

of dirty jokes

from the men center bar.


They laugh - not loudly,

they are quite old.. mousey..

squeaky voiced..


I chuckle as Skid Row skids

just outside the door -

it doesn’t come in

until after dark.


This city hasn’t much to

offer a redneck like me,

but I like this place.




Copyright © Nightwolf ... [ 2020-01-22 05:38:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: King Eddy (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 22nd January 2020 @ 03:37:55 PM AEST
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Know the feeling from my youth a long time ago.
Very clever write. Enjoyed it!


Re: King Eddy (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 23rd January 2020 @ 06:17:24 AM AEST
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clever write indeed
well done...




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