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[title] => Delete Me
[time] => 2019-11-26 16:14:40
[hometext] => If I lay here, if I just lay here ... Would you lie with me and just forget the world? ~Chasing Cars // Snow Patrol
[bodytext] => When was the decisive moment
Of no turning back,
The thought of another year
Became too much to bear.
There is a lingering effect
To all that we lack,
A stinging regret
To your lapse in commitment,
Existing in shameful whispers
Of mistakes not to be repeated.
Silence piercing through bone
Until our souls are deleted.
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Delete Me
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 04:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When was the decisive moment
Of no turning back,
The thought of another year
Became too much to bear.
There is a lingering effect
To all that we lack,
A stinging regret
To your lapse in commitment,
Existing in shameful whispers
Of mistakes not to be repeated.
Silence piercing through bone
Until our souls are deleted.
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2019-11-26 16:14:40]
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Re: Delete Me
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by Apollonia on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 04:58:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Hurts me to read, could feel the poem inside my heart
Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Delete Me
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th November 2019 @ 05:19:54 AM AEST
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Very sad but a write of reality for many.
Any type of loss is hard to cope with.
Great write and it allowed me to read other things into it. |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Jecks on
Wednesday, 27th November 2019 @ 01:31:15 PM AEST
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My first impression was not of a lost love, but the lost love for this place. So relatable.
Poingnant and well written. |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th November 2019 @ 11:16:56 AM AEST
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My god!!!! The emotion cuts like a knife! Never be shamed my Scorperiffic friend into taking that chance. It actually takes courage.
Life sucks, people suck, but hell, makes for some /*****/ great poetry!
*huge squishy hug* ❤ |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th November 2019 @ 11:19:59 AM AEST
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"Silence piercing through bone" //// / /// [s17.photobucket.com] holy /*****/! |
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Re: Delete Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 29th November 2019 @ 03:46:03 AM AEST
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The cause and effect
bring on that damn
lingering regret,
living sure aint easy |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th November 2019 @ 04:22:07 AM AEST
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I thought about how
someone might feel
as though their soul
was deleted,
standing at the borderline
just hoping to escape/
from some place where
there is no hope for them
to survive.
And how easy it seems
to be not to give a darn
Back on the borderline
where one turns their
back on another
in shame of their
own disgrace
The OAS, the organized American
States, and all the corporate
crime, and all the murky
discord about putting
ordinary people first
and foremost over
anything
so much so,
it comes down
to feeling as though
it would be better
just to be deleted,
detached, and
blank.
Peace! |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 01:14:36 AM AEST
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I haven/'/t been to this site for too long, yet I come back and am reminded of just how inspiring people can be here.
Your writing always has that "lingering effect" on me that you speak of.
Great lines, strong emotion........as ever
Steve |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th December 2019 @ 01:42:46 AM AEST
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There is a lingering effect
To all that we lack,
Beautifully put |
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Re: Delete Me
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th January 2021 @ 02:14:10 AM AEST
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Puppy_dog_eyes is one hell of a gent.
I/'/m with him. When he speaks-listen |
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Re: Delete Me
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 18th February 2022 @ 01:30:45 AM AEST
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| We really live our lives on the fading edge of eternity don/'/t we? And it can all fade to black in an instant. Relationships are as big a mystery as self-reflection in so many ways. |
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Re: Delete Me
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 2nd July 2022 @ 11:09:11 PM AEST
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I am ready to delete thee.
Time has grown old, and the mold has started to form.
To me this shouldn/'/t be the norm.
Enjoy the calm before the storm...
So long my friend.... |
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Re: Delete Me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2022 @ 02:44:33 AM AEST
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| This must/'/ve been a tough write. It is very dark and from a place that is hard to come back from. I have felt that way; when I spent 50 days in the hospital. I thought my life had come to an end, but I snapped back and now I am doing much better and you can too. I haven/'/t seen you in a while. Your words always inspire me, whether they come from a light place or a dark one. I hope you are doing well in whatever you are doing. |
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