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fearless from the sky,
while below your tons of misted vapor,
released in whispers or torrent shaking,
I feel your kiss or slap as tears join you,
slipping in rivers and streams beneath my feet,
I walk and slip and feel your wet,
and all questions of my soul,
those that bang about within
the silent clatter,
are small within the grandness
of your apathetic patter. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 62 [topic] => 48 [informant] => invierno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Pattering Rain

Contributed by invierno on Sunday, 3rd November 2019 @ 03:11:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Oh, you drop over and over,
fearless from the sky,
while below your tons of misted vapor,
released in whispers or torrent shaking,
I feel your kiss or slap as tears join you,
slipping in rivers and streams beneath my feet,
I walk and slip and feel your wet,
and all questions of my soul,
those that bang about within
the silent clatter,
are small within the grandness
of your apathetic patter.

Copyright © invierno ... [ 2019-11-03 03:11:49]
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Re: Pattering Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd November 2019 @ 05:37:50 AM AEST
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excellent imagery!
yeah the rain falls,
and it is apathetic as
sure as the suns light
grows wild flowers on
the plains, where prairie
dog live.
we sat out on a blue
morning, by the coast,
sitting on sandstone cliff
and the mist was so thick
and you could see the
great white and the
seals swimming about
And it almost seemed
as though the twilight,
the time between day
and night, held some
special meaning, since
both the sun and the moon
were seemingly in a
retrograde state, back
then, in those days,
them days - in your
heart and in your soul.
As though they could never
grow old, and as though,
they could never come
back again.

Peace!

Re: Pattering Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 4th November 2019 @ 01:54:16 AM AEST
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Just something about the rain....
What a great poem and imagery. Lovely indeed.
Welcome back Mike!!!

Re: Pattering Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 6th November 2019 @ 05:50:58 AM AEST
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I agree there is something about rain
quenches the earths thirst
feeding puddles creeks rivers lakes waterfalls etc
good poem
well done...

Re: Pattering Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 02:00:54 AM AEST
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Fascinating when you think of the cycle of water and how it ends up as rain.
We moan about it and so often complain when it appears and soaks us to the skin
But where would we be without it?

Steve

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