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when I see you around
I wonder if it is the way
that you put me down
since you left me
I got this hole in my soul
not sure of what I should do
Im just trying not to lose control

I am always chasing
the things I do not need
pretending to need nothing
but for ever out there searching
you were a spark in the darkness
and in your flame I ended up burning

I am a man yes I am
I can stand on my own
still you hurt me and you broke me
when you did me wrong
now I am stoned and alone
as I writing this poem [comments] => 3 [counter] => 134 [topic] => 32 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Stoned And Alone

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 11th October 2019 @ 01:32:15 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

why does it hurt so much
when I see you around
I wonder if it is the way
that you put me down
since you left me
I got this hole in my soul
not sure of what I should do
Im just trying not to lose control

I am always chasing
the things I do not need
pretending to need nothing
but for ever out there searching
you were a spark in the darkness
and in your flame I ended up burning

I am a man yes I am
I can stand on my own
still you hurt me and you broke me
when you did me wrong
now I am stoned and alone
as I writing this poem

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2019-10-11 01:32:15]
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Re: Stoned And Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th October 2019 @ 08:25:53 AM AEST
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perfect title
you got a lot of brothers
the world is made up of them
rich, middle class, lower class,
poor.
Stoned and alone.
perfectly intelligent,
and missing someone
special.
I hurt reading this.
I wish I had something
positive to say.

Peace!

Re: Stoned And Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 28th October 2019 @ 06:17:37 PM AEST
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A very sad write.
Being alone may have something to do with being stoned. Shake it off and leave it behind.

Re: Stoned And Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 12th February 2020 @ 01:04:41 AM AEST
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Man, Tope, this hit home really hard with me. I SO feel that flavor of pain. And "I am always chasing
the things I do not need
pretending to need nothing
but for ever out there searching" is so on spot it stings.

A little of the good green is never a bad thing in my book. But, the reason WHY needs to be solid, and despair is anything but that. I/'/m a heel for not commenting more on your poems, and I/'/m sorry for that. You/'/ve been a poet friend and wonderful commentator of mine.

Also, I truly dig your description of yourself. I can/'/t get back to it without losing this write, but know that I love it. You probably are aware that Utopia means /'/nowhere/'/. I/'/m sure you do, because you have a wickedly intelligent sense of irony.

My best to you, and if you ever need an ear or eyes, know that I am here.

Invierno

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