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Would bes and once upon a times,
There exists another world of not make believes
Across endless possibilities.
Just follow back the paths we took,
Back along our life lines.
Look to where we met,
Now farther.
Perhaps before we were born,
There exists a point.
Going forward now,
Turn at what will be,
Move around that twist in fate
To a decision never made.
Watch now as our paths intertwine,
Become one road,
On to the future of happily ever after.

Sighing now I shake my head.
I give a wave to the evanescent couple,
Across impossible distances and scattered maybes.
For though here and now I walk this path,
Inside I feel a shift of at ease.
Knowing that some other time,
Some special where,
There isn’t just a you or a just me,
There’s an us.

PKS
8/22/19

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Parallel

Contributed by Jecks on Thursday, 22nd August 2019 @ 06:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Beyond the realm of might have beens,
Would bes and once upon a times,
There exists another world of not make believes
Across endless possibilities.
Just follow back the paths we took,
Back along our life lines.
Look to where we met,
Now farther.
Perhaps before we were born,
There exists a point.
Going forward now,
Turn at what will be,
Move around that twist in fate
To a decision never made.
Watch now as our paths intertwine,
Become one road,
On to the future of happily ever after.

Sighing now I shake my head.
I give a wave to the evanescent couple,
Across impossible distances and scattered maybes.
For though here and now I walk this path,
Inside I feel a shift of at ease.
Knowing that some other time,
Some special where,
There isn’t just a you or a just me,
There’s an us.

PKS
8/22/19

Copyright Â© Jecks ... [ 2019-08-22 18:00:25]
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Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 23rd August 2019 @ 02:32:35 AM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd August 2019 @ 10:09:14 PM AEST
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I really love the style of this, Phil and as for as I/'/m as concerned, it/'/s perfect.

Thanks for sharing.

Tim

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 25th August 2019 @ 02:41:09 AM AEST
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*across endless possibilities*
indeed
great line
made think......
good flow.

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st August 2019 @ 06:05:50 AM AEST
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fate in parallel
like some distant
plight
to live the way things
are and not worry
so much about
uncertainty
thinking about
all those little
things that
bring folks together
because they were
true
because they shaped
the character in you

and made you
feel real
almost like you
needed to
exist

because you
do

You are filled with
trying to explain
what we all would
like to just say
something inside
of all of us

just waiting for the right
time --- and then
wondering just how.

there is an us,
in you.

I like your poem.
because it feels true.
Peace!

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 1st September 2019 @ 05:03:15 AM AEST
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I like this. that sense of possibility that can sometimes grip you and give you hope... you captured it well.

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 10th September 2019 @ 04:43:49 PM AEST
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Ooh nice how you wrote this and weaved in and out of that parallel world where things happened differently. Those what ifs and should have beens always make for introspective and candid writing. Well done.

~BizarroWorldScorp

Re: Parallel (User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on Monday, 11th November 2019 @ 10:07:28 AM AEST
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Amazing poem...it took me through a journey through space

Thank you for sharing!

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