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Array ( [sid] => 186326 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Universe [time] => 2019-06-19 02:05:16 [hometext] => An emotional explosion... The Phantom [bodytext] => Past the stars and beyond the moon lies a universe for me and you,
With the softest touch and a simple kiss we are reminded why we exist,

Candlelight and red wine, two hearts combine,
The moment we met we already knew, this is our universe population two,

The second our eyes met it was like an adam split,
An emotional explosion, a collision of two worlds set in motion,

Unable to speak, barely can think, hard to breath like Mt. Everest peak,
Falling fast like a shooting star, two planets collide, Venus and Mars,

Playful stars dance across the night sky, chasing forever within your eyes,
Like waves racing to the shore, a second without you is too much to endure.

Forever Faithful
The_Phantom [comments] => 7 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 2 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Universe

Contributed by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 19th June 2019 @ 02:05:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Past the stars and beyond the moon lies a universe for me and you,
With the softest touch and a simple kiss we are reminded why we exist,

Candlelight and red wine, two hearts combine,
The moment we met we already knew, this is our universe population two,

The second our eyes met it was like an adam split,
An emotional explosion, a collision of two worlds set in motion,

Unable to speak, barely can think, hard to breath like Mt. Everest peak,
Falling fast like a shooting star, two planets collide, Venus and Mars,

Playful stars dance across the night sky, chasing forever within your eyes,
Like waves racing to the shore, a second without you is too much to endure.

Forever Faithful
The_Phantom



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Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Wednesday, 19th June 2019 @ 11:12:41 PM AEST
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yes, true love does have its own universe


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Wednesday, 19th June 2019 @ 11:12:42 PM AEST
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yes, true love does have its own universe


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 20th June 2019 @ 04:05:59 AM AEST
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A deep universal love
well done


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on Thursday, 20th June 2019 @ 07:42:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd June 2019 @ 07:38:53 AM AEST
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pretty, everything, pretty pretty,
expansive, and just hoping,
it lasts forever just like
the distance that is really pretty pretty
huge, humongous, And forever,
NO MATTER WHAT.

I like it. I will hold you to it!
That/'/s what she said.

Peace!


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 30th June 2019 @ 09:12:26 PM AEST
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You had me at “emotional explosion” ...
This was fun to read and flowed along at a breathtaking pace to accompany the flutters of heady love. Good stuff.


~Scorp


Re: Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 12:43:57 AM AEST
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To find that special bond is like finding gold or a rare jewel........just as precious.
Two hearts really do become one, two minds become synchronous.
A wonderful feeling!!!

Steve




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