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[aid] => mick
[title] => Absent in the present
[time] => 2019-06-18 06:13:27
[hometext] => Sometimes the quiet ones are overlooked.
[bodytext] => Unknown I came. And thus remained. Like cellophane.
Tomorrow finds no trace of me. Who came and left Invisibly.
No sound recalls; no shadowed wall,
No stain remains; no footstep falls,
Upon your stair. Who wasn’t there.
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Absent in the present
Contributed by
softerware
on
Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 06:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Unknown I came. And thus remained. Like cellophane.
Tomorrow finds no trace of me. Who came and left Invisibly.
No sound recalls; no shadowed wall,
No stain remains; no footstep falls,
Upon your stair. Who wasn’t there.
Copyright ©
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2019-06-18 06:13:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Absent in the present
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 12:17:21 PM AEST (User
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Exactly; how can someone be remembered when
that person was lost in a sea of a million faces.
When there is no memory the traces that are left
behind quickly fade away.
Yet again youve written a piece that gets the mind
working and youve done it with so few words.
Rich |
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Re: Absent in the present
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 02:21:15 PM AEST (User
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Great write.
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Re: Absent in the present
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST (User
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So true. But as I age I want to disappear from all the drama of life. Being in business for 40 some years makes you this way. Live in peace. Great one Jaye! |
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Re: Absent in the present
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 20th June 2019 @ 04:14:50 AM AEST (User
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And the quiet ones are some times remembered
and their style missed.... |
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Re: Absent in the present
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 12:38:23 AM AEST (User
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I/'/m one of the quiet ones, moving through life barely noticed.
I wonder if I will be remember in years to come......hopefully by one or two at least.
Wonderful write yet again,
Steve |
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