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I only see bars that divide
One of us is jailed
While the other thrives
I often ask why
Let it be, let it be
She cries out to me
It`s so easy to say
Cause you are free.
Let it be, let it be
Clearly, you are too blind to see
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Let It Be

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Monday, 17th June 2019 @ 01:27:58 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

When I close my eyes
I only see bars that divide
One of us is jailed
While the other thrives
I often ask why
Let it be, let it be
She cries out to me
It`s so easy to say
Cause you are free.
Let it be, let it be
Clearly, you are too blind to see
The darkness that surrounds me

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-06-17 13:27:58]
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Re: Let It Be (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 12:47:33 AM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Let It Be (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 18th June 2019 @ 03:52:06 AM AEST
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If we only took the time to see others in more dimension. Your poem is a longing to be noticed. But we jump to closure too swiftly to discover the best qualities about others.
To be liked, we have to like FIRST. And even then it doesn/'/t always bear fruit.
WE are are in such a hurry and so afraid we/'/ll miss something...that we miss what is standing right in front of us, while we took over your shoulder to see what is behind you.
TOO BLIND TO SEE.
softerware

Re: Let It Be (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 22nd June 2019 @ 11:50:18 PM AEST
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WOW! SIR JAMES STOCKDALE, YOU ARE THE BEST POETRY WRITER HERE AND NOW.YOUR OUTLOOK IN THIS POEM IS DARK AND SHARP,YOUR WRITING IS FROM A POINT OF YOU OTHERS WISH THEY HAD.WHAT AN EYE OPENING POEM JUST SIMPLY EXCELLENT FROM BEGINNING TO END.LOVE IT.

Re: Let It Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 04:46:35 AM AEST
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//Now that`s pretty damn cool and see...you finally used that "let it be."😉

Thank you,

Me
😎

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