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[title] => Almost Gone
[time] => 2019-05-31 14:48:28
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[bodytext] => She won/'/t lie to you,
But you may still get burnt,
There is a fire inside her,
Behind the ocean eyes,
And gentle smiles,
She can fight,
She can scream,
She can stand up to the sun, himself,
But she is tired,
Hiding in flickering light,
Losing the confidence,
She once held so dearly.
She/'/s almost gone.
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Almost Gone
Contributed by
Frecks
on
Friday, 31st May 2019 @ 02:48:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She won/'/t lie to you,
But you may still get burnt,
There is a fire inside her,
Behind the ocean eyes,
And gentle smiles,
She can fight,
She can scream,
She can stand up to the sun, himself,
But she is tired,
Hiding in flickering light,
Losing the confidence,
She once held so dearly.
She/'/s almost gone.
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Re: Almost Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 1st June 2019 @ 03:50:58 PM AEST (User
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The fire of youth burns so brightly that it cannot be sustained. But what a lovely portrait of its vessel you have painted for us BEHIND THE OCEAN EYES..
We fade, we mellow as we age, and our resolve becomes uncertain, as you say HIDING IN THE FLICKERING LIGHT.
This is lovely, gentle, and sincerely rendered as a tribute. We should all be so cherished.
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Re: Almost Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd June 2019 @ 08:08:52 AM AEST (User
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slowly she gets her point across
like she always had
long ago
she is wondrous, the definition of beauty
that could never be defined
The Giving Tree.
Peace! |
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Re: Almost Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 3rd June 2019 @ 02:40:52 AM AEST (User
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she needs to hang on
regain her confidence
and
shine brightly once again |
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