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[aid] => mick
[title] => AD...................D
[time] => 2019-05-22 03:01:10
[hometext] => I/'/m begining to suspect...........
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I forgot myself,
ended up somewhere else.
I started in the garage dreaming,
caressing the money
before writing Lot # 1
on a white index card.
My gaze happed upon a box,
Then….then I zipped inside
to deal with a mouse,
box in hand.
Harmlessly left on the table,
hand to eye to brain to mind
saddled for a roam,
now I’m here,
and here’s the poem.
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[topic] => 61
[informant] => invierno
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AD...................D
Contributed by
invierno
on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 03:01:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I forgot myself,
ended up somewhere else.
I started in the garage dreaming,
caressing the money
before writing Lot # 1
on a white index card.
My gaze happed upon a box,
Then….then I zipped inside
to deal with a mouse,
box in hand.
Harmlessly left on the table,
hand to eye to brain to mind
saddled for a roam,
now I’m here,
and here’s the poem.
Copyright ©
invierno
... [
2019-05-22 03:01:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: AD...................D
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 01:34:51 PM AEST (User
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men were never meant to multi-task and why women
are so good at it....it is because it is an ability that
was invented by women for women (lol)
men were created with one-track minds, we can only
focus on one thing at a time. God created women to
help us use our time more wisely and be more
efficient.
But on the other side..women ask us to do something
and then while we are doing that task they ask us to
do something else and then wonder why the first
task doesnt get finished.
Another brilliantly penned work of art
Rich |
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Re: AD...................D
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 03:28:31 PM AEST (User
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I/'/m with you Mike.
I/'/m feeling the same way. Doing the things it would take four people to do. My mind is fractured. My father used to call it being scatter-brained before the
techno phrases came out.
I/'/m with you on this one. Great write. |
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Re: AD...................D
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 05:20:52 PM AEST (User
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A clever poem that demonstrates the value of synergy. Men/'/s ability to focus on the goal; women to multi-task. He misses the big picture; she takes too long to reach the mark.
Ah..but together, that is another story! And to our delight, NOW IM HERE AND HERES THE POEM!
A fun lesson from a versatile YPDC writer.
softerware |
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Re: AD...................D
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Friday, 24th May 2019 @ 12:37:11 PM AEST (User
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This is a fun piece to read, truths, abstracts, life like skipping a stone across a pond. Real. |
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