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her movement an art form
rendering me helpless

This spirit reaches to hold solid ground
yet her soul demands fulfillment
grasping, all I reach is air

I retreat slipping back into her domain
this spirit engulfed
Conquered
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The Quest

Contributed by thelaststraw on Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 03:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Her native American smile enticing
her movement an art form
rendering me helpless

This spirit reaches to hold solid ground
yet her soul demands fulfillment
grasping, all I reach is air

I retreat slipping back into her domain
this spirit engulfed
Conquered

Copyright © thelaststraw ... [ 2019-05-17 15:16:57]
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Re: The Quest (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 12:44:23 AM AEST
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I have many friends in the tribal gaming industry that would appreciate your affectionate sentiments.
..This spirit engulfed. Conquered.
your last words have the finality of a signature. A fitting closure to a well crafted quest.
softerware

Re: The Quest (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 04:05:30 AM AEST
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A people once 130,000,000 strong (1/3 of the current USA population) now reduced to 5.4 million.

It/'/s a tragedy Shakespeare couildn/'/t conjure.

She so8unds like an unwitting enchantress, where her unplanned movements are magic to the eye that sees.

Well done capturing a fine nuance.

Invierno

Re: The Quest (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 02:28:03 PM AEST
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Mike and Jaye said it well.
Great writing..... Refreshing piece.

Re: The Quest (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 07:00:46 PM AEST
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I can imagine the struggle
as her essence overwhelms you,
interesting flow.

Re: The Quest (User Rating: 1 )
by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Tuesday, 21st May 2019 @ 05:22:12 PM AEST
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Well done

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