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[title] => Time
[time] => 2019-05-14 19:56:16
[hometext] => How important it is!
[bodytext] => Precious for it is a gift
How does one wrap it?
The only question.
Packaged too loosely
it soon unravels
Bound too tightly
becomes limited and bruised
Properly tied
possibilities are endless
when unwrapped
life is explored
How quickly it passes
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[notes] => Edited for spelling, as requested ~ Moderator_18 May 14, 2019
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Time
Contributed by
thelaststraw
on
Tuesday, 14th May 2019 @ 07:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Precious for it is a gift
How does one wrap it?
The only question.
Packaged too loosely
it soon unravels
Bound too tightly
becomes limited and bruised
Properly tied
possibilities are endless
when unwrapped
life is explored
How quickly it passes
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thelaststraw
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 01:04:37 AM AEST (User
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Many here have written about Time including yours truly.
But I think you/'/re the first to wrap it as a gift...nice!
Enjoyed the piece. |
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 04:22:10 AM AEST (User
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I like the metaphors and this expresses a unique perspective.
Thank you and welcome to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 12:36:09 PM AEST (User
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you are correct when done right
the possibilities are endless
good one
thanx for sharing |
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 07:59:36 PM AEST (User
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Well expressed. Kind of how I/'/ve been feeling lately. Refer to poem called The Green Shoot, posted just now for a similar concept poem.
Invierno |
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 08:54:41 PM AEST (User
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Nice metaphor. I especially like the ending, unwrapping time...who knew? |
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