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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Touch
[time] => 2019-05-05 13:59:24
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => Every day
I see you
as we pass by one another
you smile
and I nod my head
you catch me looking as you are walking away
I get embarrassed and apologize
but you say it is okay
and have a nice day
The next time I seen ya
I thought Id take a chance
even a cosmic psycho needs love
as we started to talk
I was mesmerized by your smile
when you laughed rainbows formed
I could not talk anymore
you sensed my confusion
and asked me what was wrong
I truthfully told you
I was overcome d by a feeling so strong
you just smiled and looked me in the eye
as you took my hand
and said lets go have fun
I started thinking you were the one
I can not forget the way you felt
the first time I held you in my arms
you were talking
but I never heard a word you said
I was overwhelmed by your charms
oh baby love is strong
Theres a spring in my step
and my frown has faded away
I create like
Leonardo DA vinci when I flow on a poem
it is all because of your touch
I never knew I could feel so much
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[counter] => 118
[topic] => 2
[informant] => unknown_utopia
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The Touch
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 5th May 2019 @ 01:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Every day
I see you
as we pass by one another
you smile
and I nod my head
you catch me looking as you are walking away
I get embarrassed and apologize
but you say it is okay
and have a nice day
The next time I seen ya
I thought Id take a chance
even a cosmic psycho needs love
as we started to talk
I was mesmerized by your smile
when you laughed rainbows formed
I could not talk anymore
you sensed my confusion
and asked me what was wrong
I truthfully told you
I was overcome d by a feeling so strong
you just smiled and looked me in the eye
as you took my hand
and said lets go have fun
I started thinking you were the one
I can not forget the way you felt
the first time I held you in my arms
you were talking
but I never heard a word you said
I was overwhelmed by your charms
oh baby love is strong
Theres a spring in my step
and my frown has faded away
I create like
Leonardo DA vinci when I flow on a poem
it is all because of your touch
I never knew I could feel so much
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unknown_utopia
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2019-05-05 13:59:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Touch
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 5th May 2019 @ 05:26:54 PM AEST (User
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What a lovely tale of the way love feels. Your poem takes us along on your journey, all the way to your happy ending. It brings out the romantic in us and kindles hope that we too may find such passion in our hearts yet again. A most persuasive argument for letting ourselves fall in love. softerware |
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Re: The Touch
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 5th May 2019 @ 06:48:13 PM AEST (User
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It tends to down hill after that. ( Don/'/t listen to me)
Seriously great write. Reminds me of the teenage years a bit.
What you wrote is what it/'/s all about...………
I can/'/t help but smile. |
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Re: The Touch
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 5th May 2019 @ 06:56:36 PM AEST (User
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Reminds me of my AC/DC days...……..
"Touch Too Much" |
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Re: The Touch
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th May 2019 @ 03:09:02 AM AEST (User
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What an awesome poem! I just live it!
Thank you for sharing! |
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