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[title] => Just What You See
[time] => 2019-04-26 14:39:12
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[bodytext] => I won`t look back to the road just traveled
For fear, my life would unravel
I won`t sing that familiar song
It came at a time when everything was so wrong
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Now I live life to be free
Try to be just what you see
In the end, I`ve got to be me
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Just What You See
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Friday, 26th April 2019 @ 02:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I won`t look back to the road just traveled
For fear, my life would unravel
I won`t sing that familiar song
It came at a time when everything was so wrong
~~~~
Now I live life to be free
Try to be just what you see
In the end, I`ve got to be me
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jamesstockdale
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Re: Just What You See
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 27th April 2019 @ 03:32:08 AM AEST (User
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You said it better James by far,
We each must be just who we are.
Time will heal and leave behind us,
Pain and sorrow cannot bind us.
Now, at last, its seems your free;
It shows here in your poetry..
Not of old familiar songs,
Not of righting ancient wrongs.
But as you say, at last to see;
The way that you were meant to be..
Free of sorrow, light of heart.
Home at last, a brand new start.
softerware |
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Re: Just What You See
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th April 2019 @ 06:40:56 AM AEST (User
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Exactly!
Nicely done, Jimmy.
Keep `em comin`. |
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Re: Just What You See
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 10:44:36 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful, truthful clear and wonderfully simplistic, (and therefor, correct), perspective.
Mike |
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Re: Just What You See
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:22:39 AM AEST (User
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//Definitely need to be committed to be one/'/s self.
I tell people nowadays that I wasn`t put here to please them and that applies to them too.
Good words.
Thanks,
Dugan |
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