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[aid] => mick
[title] => Your Blood
[time] => 2019-04-02 17:52:41
[hometext] => I haven`t posted here for five years... and nearly every day of those years has been empty of poetry. And maybe this isn`t it either but it`s the closest I`ve been in so long.
[bodytext] => There`s a hole inside me
and it`s bleeding your blood.
I let you in -
deeper than the knife
you stabbed me with
and I felt you touch my soul
with yours.
Oh how I wish to forget
the hope that you wrought
that could reach that soul
when the pain that you brought
was stronger than the love
that once made it whole
and
no bandages can fix this
not even stitches
can stifle the bleeding
the wound is still seeping
I`ve bled for six months
I still bleed every day
nothing can sooth
the wound of your pain
There`s a hole inside me
it`s bleeding your blood
and the knife you`re still holding
- just the victim of love
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[informant] => lostinmyself
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Your Blood
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 05:52:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There`s a hole inside me
and it`s bleeding your blood.
I let you in -
deeper than the knife
you stabbed me with
and I felt you touch my soul
with yours.
Oh how I wish to forget
the hope that you wrought
that could reach that soul
when the pain that you brought
was stronger than the love
that once made it whole
and
no bandages can fix this
not even stitches
can stifle the bleeding
the wound is still seeping
I`ve bled for six months
I still bleed every day
nothing can sooth
the wound of your pain
There`s a hole inside me
it`s bleeding your blood
and the knife you`re still holding
- just the victim of love
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Re: Your Blood
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 05:57:48 PM AEST
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| :/ I am sorry for the weird obliques within the poem and unfinished HTML I don/'/t know what/'/s happened |
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Re: Your Blood
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by Jecks on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 06:22:44 PM AEST
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So much hurt here, so much pain. It makes me angry with whoever did this to you. I can only hope and say that time and friends will make it more bearable for you until you find the right one to heal it for you.
At the very least I`m glad to see you writing again. I`ve missed it. |
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Re: Your Blood
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 06:59:39 PM AEST
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Welcome Back!!
nothing to be sorry about. you wrote from your heart
and laid out in words what is on your mind and
burdening you. That is what poetry is. I am so sorry
that you are having to endure this kind of pain.
And like Jecks, angry with the one that hurt you.
If you need a listening ear please leave me a PM.
God Bless and I hope and pray that with time the
pain will lessen.
Rich
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Re: Your Blood
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 09:16:02 PM AEST
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Many of us feel the same way at times.
So you/'/re in good company. Welcome back and what a wonderfully written poem albeit sad. Best to write it out and that eases the pain... // This is now normal here and that/'/s why we often use * and ` instead.... No apology required. Enjoy a new beginning here again :) |
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Re: Your Blood
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2019 @ 11:36:16 AM AEST
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Your world may have been void of poetry for five years, but
you definitely did not lose the artistry, my lovely. I/'/m with Jecks -
as I read, I felt overwhelming torture and sadness but also
anger at who or what caused this pain. You have a beautiful
way of evoking deep emotions.
I know that to feel the euphoric highs, we must endure the
lows, but while in the depth of those lows, life seems almost
unbearable. It does produce some exquisitely written poetry,
however. And this; THIS is proof positive of that.
Hugs, my dear friend. Here if you need me.
~B |
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Re: Your Blood
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2019 @ 08:41:07 PM AEST
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The pain of letting someone in
and then they gut you
Is the worst
deep pain felt in this flow...... |
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Re: Your Blood
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th April 2019 @ 05:53:01 AM AEST
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This....this is such amazing poetry!!! I`m sorry I didn`t have time to comment on this when you posted this but I do now.
This is an incredible piece of art, Phyllis, that seethes with such raw emotion. So great to see you back and sharing your much needed talent with the rest of us peasants. 🙂
Thank you!
Timmy |
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