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The scent of murder found the air; absent of one lady fair.
Beneath the lake, who shall not wake;
Another place beside her waits
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A lovers destiny

Contributed by softerware on Sunday, 24th March 2019 @ 07:24:49 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession

Just we two my love agreed. Yet kept another secretly.
The scent of murder found the air; absent of one lady fair.
Beneath the lake, who shall not wake;
Another place beside her waits
That none need mourn for her embrace.

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2019-03-24 07:24:49]
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Re: A lovers destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 24th March 2019 @ 10:54:29 PM AEST
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The more the merrier eh Jaye? Except in marriage that is 😇🤪👍

Well done my friend
Roses
Rakwe

Re: A lovers destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th March 2019 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST
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The scent of murder, huh? Sounds scary. Remind me to never cross her.

I`m consistently amazed how you just keep writing great poems.

Thank you for being you.

Sir Timotheus

Re: A lovers destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 26th March 2019 @ 03:21:06 PM AEST
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Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
That is what I take away from your piece.
Apparently revenge is best served cold and the
woman that is dead cant get any colder.
ANOTHER PLACE BESIDE HER WAITS
a place for the cheating husband?

Amazing piece as always
Rich

Re: A lovers destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 27th March 2019 @ 03:28:56 AM AEST
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truly enjoy your writiing

Re: A lovers destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 02:57:44 PM AEST
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I love the style in which you wrote this. The piece has a wonderful harmony to it!

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