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Damn that television
it will not let me sleep
Im addicted to moving pictures
my damage is deep

On days like this
I spell out my name on a dirty window
spitting venom at random people passing
with no pattern
Full moon making me psycho
I love you equinox
is all that matters

complication for no reason
taking up to much time
all I am really wanting
is a piece of mind

dont care about collusion
it is not relevant
my intent is never to disrespect
those who lack intelligence

save me from the savers
they come with bad behaviors
they are the ones
who walk on cloven hooves
pretending to be savoirs

born and raised catholic
I religiously bleed
a couple of our fathers
and hail marys is all I need

simple words spoken
seem to hurt my throat most
using self service
making the work force ghost

rambling is just a thing I do
my cousins is the mad hatter
as a tsunami of flows make the landscape spin
I love you equinox
is all that matters

The capt says check the cargo
as the ship sails on the secret wind
full moon making me psycho
patterns scatter when they are shattered
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Damn That Television

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 10:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




Damn that television
it will not let me sleep
Im addicted to moving pictures
my damage is deep

On days like this
I spell out my name on a dirty window
spitting venom at random people passing
with no pattern
Full moon making me psycho
I love you equinox
is all that matters

complication for no reason
taking up to much time
all I am really wanting
is a piece of mind

dont care about collusion
it is not relevant
my intent is never to disrespect
those who lack intelligence

save me from the savers
they come with bad behaviors
they are the ones
who walk on cloven hooves
pretending to be savoirs

born and raised catholic
I religiously bleed
a couple of our fathers
and hail marys is all I need

simple words spoken
seem to hurt my throat most
using self service
making the work force ghost

rambling is just a thing I do
my cousins is the mad hatter
as a tsunami of flows make the landscape spin
I love you equinox
is all that matters

The capt says check the cargo
as the ship sails on the secret wind
full moon making me psycho
patterns scatter when they are shattered




Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2019-03-23 22:08:59]
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Re: Damn That Television (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 24th March 2019 @ 02:20:29 PM AEST
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May the evil spirit of boredom leave you in peace. 😇

Well done

Barkeep!

Raker


Re: Damn That Television (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th March 2019 @ 07:19:52 AM AEST
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"my intent is never to disrespect
those who lack intelligence"

And I have much respect for you!

Thank you television for apparently inspiring U_U to write this brain flowing out great poem. So many thoughts!!! Reminds me of me when I can`t sleep and the thoughts are running rampant.

Very enjoyable

Thank you!




Re: Damn That Television (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 11:48:53 PM AEST
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I/'/m with Timmy.
Great writing!


Re: Damn That Television (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Thursday, 4th April 2019 @ 11:46:32 AM AEST
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Awesome. Reading this poem feels like watching the movie
"Stay" - I had to relive it a few times to absorb all the meanings
and nuances. And with each repeated stanza I was drawn in
more and more. That is how great writing works, my friend.

nicely done! ^_^

~ Breezy


Re: Damn That Television (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Thursday, 30th May 2019 @ 04:06:34 PM AEST
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Me to u
U_U
Chuckle my brothers
0 and 1 s
Never a bob or two
To be able to give freely
money making sales sinks ships full of tricks

man has no business in car go ships of loose lips selling ships that sink setting sail as sails made of money fail against stormy seas wind and and gales.




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