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Who hijack desire and bury tradition.
Gleeful to see us come out of their stores;
Hummming their jingles and dressed like billboards.
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Mall mamas

Contributed by softerware on Friday, 22nd March 2019 @ 06:42:49 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

We’re walking the paths of others ambitions;
Who hijack desire and bury tradition.
Gleeful to see us come out of their stores;
Hummming their jingles and dressed like billboards.

Copyright Â© softerware ... [ 2019-03-22 06:42:49]
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Re: Mall mamas (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 12:09:13 AM AEST
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That is AWESOME.

The first two lines are so very true.

The last word of the last line......perfection personified.

Mike

Re: Mall mamas (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 05:57:24 AM AEST
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gratification stratification
ahhhhh the frozen coca cola purchased
at the K-Mart deli in the middle of winter
in the Midwest next door was the hardware
and across the byway a shoe repair and
the very first Little Ceaser Pizza.

Where I grew up, around the corner from,
the honeymoon home where Henry Ford
lived.

we walked there. Little did we know about
the Mall that would become,
and eventually fail.

But hey, I dig what you wrote.
Peace!

Re: Mall mamas (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 26th March 2019 @ 01:16:04 PM AEST
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Over time "THE PATHS OF OTHERS AMBITIONS"
has become the ruts that we find ourselves stuck in.
Whether its that of corporations, those weve looked
up to as role models and sometimes even family.
With corporations all the want is our money and
we are so willing to give it to them. As far as role
models and family...the rut we find ourselves in is
the one we tread trying to live up to their examples
and expectations.

Rich

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