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We both were puppies in our day

My friend who still remembered when;
So we could share those times again!
Amazed at all the things we dared;
When we were too young to be scared.

Without you here to talk with me;
I may forget some memories;
But not the one who made them true;
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Pledge

Contributed by softerware on Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 08:39:14 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

She and I go back a ways;
We both were puppies in our day

My friend who still remembered when;
So we could share those times again!
Amazed at all the things we dared;
When we were too young to be scared.

Without you here to talk with me;
I may forget some memories;
But not the one who made them true;
I promise......... Ill remember you.

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2019-02-14 08:39:14]
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Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 12:36:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful but sad.
This was wonderful.
This really touched me.

Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 12:50:52 PM AEST
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A beautiful pledge as well as a beautiful tribute. This
is what I consider a true friend also. Over time we
may forget some memories but as you said..all it takes
is thinking about them to help you remember things
that you thought you had forgotten.
Have a great day.
Rich

Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 04:21:20 PM AEST
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I think you speak to yourself. I see not a drop of sadness in this poem. I see happiness and memories. A shade of melancholy perhaps, but who doesn/'/t have that?

I like this one quite a lot, Soft.

Invierno

Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Saturday, 16th February 2019 @ 02:21:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem from the heart. Love this.

Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th February 2019 @ 10:09:01 AM AEST
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we could wonder,
aye, don/'/t know
just where I am going,
but I am going to try,
just what I feel,
but I just don/'/t know
I, have made a decision,
I am gonna try to
nullify my life
And well, I might guess
that I just don/'/t know

I just wish that, just wish
that, you remember me

And you do, forgetting
all the rest,
but not forgetting anything

we were just two people
and the world has changed
so much,

things are the same
and yet,
we both know

Re: Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th February 2019 @ 06:13:34 AM AEST
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What a wonderful dedication! I adore this poem.

"Amazed at all the things we dared;
When we were too young to be scared."

No kidding, right?

Thank you for another great one, Mrs.Softy.

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